Is tonight the night you'll save me?

sara_lou • 218 followers

Suck me in
You take me with your sin
Turn the lights off baby

Tonight's the night you're gonna save me

Make me feel
And make my heart heal
Put back the pieces you see

Tonight's the night you're gonna save me

Take me tonight
Hold me closely... Oh so tight
Out of you're sight... I'll never be

Tonight's the night you're gonna save me

Make me believe
Promise you won't leave
Show me the man you can really be

Tonight's the night you're gonna save me

Make my heart pound
Sweep my feet off the ground
Make me scream with total glee

Is tonight the night you'll save me?

#emotional-vulnerability #general #passionate-plea #romantic-tension

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Comments & Feedback (10)

Aug 25, 2012 at 9:59 PM

@niixxz thanks for the RP 😊

Aug 25, 2012 at 10:02 PM

@sara_lou no problem! It made my heartbeat accelerate a bit haha. Great writing 😃

Aug 25, 2012 at 10:03 PM

@niixxz cheers Hun 😊

Aug 25, 2012 at 10:30 PM

Love it Hun 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Aug 25, 2012 at 10:32 PM

@misslittleDHP thank you Hun 💐💗

Aug 25, 2012 at 10:36 PM

Yeah! 🔥🔥🔥late night ketchup... Lovely stuff Sara 👏❤💋

Aug 25, 2012 at 10:38 PM

@leelee101 aww cheers Hun 😘💗

Aug 26, 2012 at 1:09 AM

Awesome stuff 😘😘😘

Aug 26, 2012 at 1:11 AM

@glen thanks Hun 😘💜

Aug 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM

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Aug 27, 2012 at 12:03 AM

@RichWithey haha yeah write way too much lol! :) x

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