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Losing Grip

She will never truly appreciate
When you say her beauty within radiates
You can tell her till you are blue in the face
But this girl will always think she is not part of the human race

She will probably never accept
Your willingness to protect
Or the way you sense her fear
Never wanting her to shed another tear

She will never understand you
But to her best friend she will always be true
Because losing you
Was the hardest thing this girl ever had to do

Couldn't think of a fitting title... Suggestions welcome!

Massive thanks to @leelee101 for title help

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Comments & Feedback (7)

Lovely stuff hunny โค I know it sounds sad, but 'Losing' would be my title ๐Ÿ‘โค๐Ÿ˜˜

@leelee101 thank you hunni and thanks for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’œโ˜•

@sarahgamal thanks for the RP Hun ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’

@naaviie thanks Nic for the RP ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sara_lou very good write Sara,love it ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’

@gazplend thanks hun ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ’œ

@gazplend and thank you very muchly for the RP ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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