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Have You Noticed?

Has any one noticed how meaningless our conversations and daily lives have become? We talk just to talk. We have no reason to talk any more other than to fill an empty void.

The same has happened to our music, our theater, our games. They have evolved from feelings that are heard to noise that appeals to our sexual instincts, from the acting of skilled men and women portraying socially controversial situations to cookie cutter romances or adventures, our games developing from thought provoking chess and checkers to stupid things such as "wii bowling".

As much as I enjoy these things, because I do, we are being numbed and stupefied by it. We no longer require skills. Only basic movement. We are being returned to our primitive states as we become more sophisticated. We are losing our ability to think, our ability and right to experience life. And for what? Sure things are simpler, but with this simplicity comes loneliness and a sense of uselessness. How do we prevent life from being taken over by simplicity?

serenityeverard

@serenityeverard

I am an exceptional writer....so says my teacher. I'm here to see if she's right. I want to prove to myself that I'm not being fed a load of crap. I wanna be criticized as much as you guys can criticize me. Tell me what would make my stories better. Tell me if I spell something wrong. Tell if my ideas are boring and mainstream or too out of the ordinary. Just judge my writing the best you can Kay? I use writing to rid myself of emotions so don't be too surprised if plot lines change dramatically. So, you wanna know about me right? That's the only reason you keep reading...I'm a 16 year old girl from san diego. I'm a navy brat, so that means I've been every where. I like to meet new people and I love to travel. I dream of living on the road, and documenting things in my life through writing, photography and cinematography.

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Really well said, you've been busy researching. (-:

Research is just collecting information through observation.

@Stablish and thank you

@serenityeverard nice!! We survive through the arts and shared knowledge and experiences. When we fully understand mans truths then we will not be dumbed down and alone. ;-)

You think wii bowling is stupid? Look at call of duty, all the games for the series are the same exact thing with a different gun or something, and in my opinion I think that's pretty retarded.

@MrReaper777 I didn't mention COD because although it is mind numbing it is also instinctually developing. I enjoy many of the things I listed, however they are, in the end, all mind starving

Well I play lots a video games and I'm one of the more smarter kids in class@serenityeverard

@MrReaper777 yes, I can believe that. So do I. I did not say that video games are a sole cause of intellectual disfunction. Many things are to bla

To blame. When I say intellectual distinction I'm referring, not to the way people learn, but the way people act with in society.

I must admit this a though out blog, string from almost transcendent wisdom. I'm glad you are facing a bigger issue, bigger than you me and even Opuss. Well done.

@Freez thank you โ˜บhaha I wish we could go back to the times where all that was a popular tv show

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