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The Twisted Circus Of My Mind

A carousel of
emotions are spinning
inside my head

Eyes, the portal of
my soul have long since
been dead

A puppeteer takes
control of the strings
of my heart

Whilst the ghost
train carrying my past
fails to depart

The ring master
controls the dark recesses
of my mind

Beautiful Ballerinas
deceive and to happiness
I'm blind

The iron man strains
under the burden of my
secrets

A magician plays
with the truth and shows
only tricks

Decisions right and
wrong are juggled by my
thoughts

Life is a tight rope
of lessons that can't
always be taught

As the face painter
completes my sombre death
mask

The lion tamer
cracks the whip demanding
my final task

sjw

@sjw

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Comments & Feedback (33)

@sjw love it! πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

This is darkly ace! Love it babe πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜xx

Brilliant πŸ‘πŸ‘β€

I likey hun πŸ‘πŸŒΉβ€

Superb Sienna - wonderfully imaginative & succeeded in creating a vivid 'twisted' circus in my headπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜˜

Good stuff full of description. πŸ‘πŸ’š

Great stuff πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ‘

Great idea and descriptions πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ loved it πŸ‘ŒπŸ˜˜

@HingAling24 thanks glad you like it 😘

@gazplend thank you darling like you said I have a twisted sun conscience! Hehe 😘xx

Sub not sun grrr! @gazplend πŸ‘†

@sarahgamal thank you and πŸ’for the RP 😘

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Love it, nicely written πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@Stablish thank you hunni and have some β˜• for the RP 😘

@sjw ; ooh thanking you :) my ex boss bought me a chai latte today nom nom nom!! xx

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@PoppyA Mmmm yummy! πŸ’—

@RichWithey thank you hun and πŸ’‹ for the RP x

Shits sick with it , good work

Fantastical stuff my sweet πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘

This is utterly genius. Well done keep it up. Good luck for the future hope you stay at the top for a while. But overall well done. Xx

@misslittleDHP thank you Kim and mwaah for the RP πŸ˜˜πŸ’πŸΈ

@wolfwaff @mattreb10 thank you both 😘

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