tell me I should leave.
Yet they tempt me,
which do I believe?
Your head tells you go,
yet to me no sign of closure does it show.
You push,
I pull,
but still no conclusion
Your mind,
it taunts you with confusion.
You protest at my words,
all methods of reason
going unheard.
But when I look into your eyes,
therein is where the real truth lies.
A betrayal of the coldness....
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Comments & Feedback (22)
@sarahgamal @RichWithey @misslittleDHP read it again guys it's not sad! maybe I've ended it wrong π
@sjw I've read again my sweet...does the ending that his eyes betray the coldness as by looking deep he is warmhearted??..am I being a thicko tonight?...lol
@sjw just deleted the last message as it didn't make sense....ok my sweet I've read it again...does the ending mean that his coldness has been betrayed by what you've seen in his eyes...eg that he truly cares?....or am I being thick ...lol?
Yayy! Yes because the actions and speech is cold but the eyes betray that i.e they show the opposite, you know like in the heat of the moment we say and do things we don't mean.. Thank you for reading it again πππππ
@RichWithey lmao πππthought you were losing the plot for a minute! and thank you the added twist I feel quite proud of, that's why I almost had a tantrum! π‘ lol x
@sjw yay I'm not thick....a very clever write Hun ...I love that it had this depth to it !!....thought I was losing it then and having a senior momentπππ³ππ
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