I Will

smellyfingers • 1199 followers

Warning!! Contains soppy mumbo jumbo!! Pmsl

Just realised this be my 200th post! Wow!

Come hun take my hand
I'm a romantic kind of a man
No maps nor plans
Take you too a new land

Close your pretty eyes
Trust me I'm by your side
Listen to my words now
Clear your mind of all doubt

I'll paint the sky with shooting stars
Wrap the moon in pretty bows
Erase your dark clouds
Loving you: I'm very proud

Love me as I love you
You do know I love you so
Hold me babe and I'll never let you go
Let's start our own romantic life show

Sit down upon the morning dew
Say "I will" when I get down to kneel
Take my hand now in yours
Nature awaits your yes in applause

Open your eyes with gentle tears
Happiness together throughout our years
Banish all hate, insecurities and fears
"I will" are the words I long to hear

#general #love-declaration #proposal #romantic-poetry

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Comments & Feedback (31)

Jun 18, 2012 at 4:52 PM

Unlike u to be soppy mate! Good write tho

Jun 18, 2012 at 4:54 PM

This is beautiful, you soppy man 😊💗

Jun 18, 2012 at 4:59 PM

@puffy1980 haha in quiet a soppy got mate, not all weird and deep 👍 thank you and for repost 🍻

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:01 PM

@PoppyA thank you gorgeous and yes I'm a soppy git 💐 and thank you kindly for repost 💋

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:03 PM

@smellyfingers welcome!

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:07 PM

Like the soppy style, well written👍

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:09 PM

Have you had a bump on the head? Lmao! It's very romantic and soppy 💞 I like it 😽

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:15 PM

Altogether now arrrrrrrrrrr 😜

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:17 PM

@Stablish thank you sir appreciate it and the repost 🍻

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:21 PM

@sjw honestly? Lmfao I was thinking about your poem "A Little Something" and my mind drifted off into a nice place hahahahaha Mwah and thank you for repost baby 💋

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:22 PM

@smellyfingers you appear to have stolen my title, sir soppy! Kidding mate, that's a lovely read this quiet time of day. Well done sir 👍😊

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:23 PM

@glen Lmfao lots of inspiring people on opuss mate 😜 beer for the repost sir? 🍺🍺🍻👍

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:25 PM

@leelee101 no never sir soppy!! Sir smooth here 😜 lol. Thank you kind sir for the repost 👍

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:26 PM

Awwww sweetie!! What a nice soppy state 😜💚😘

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:27 PM

@smellyfingers awww well I'm glad it inspired you babe 😽 and your welcome 😽

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:27 PM

See? Surprises. All the way through. From vibrant rage to romance in under 60 :-) 🍻🍻🍻 impressive

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:28 PM

@smellyfingers no problemo sir smooth! 👍😊

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:29 PM

@smellyfingers sorry I forgot 🐒💨🐒💨🐒💨🐒💨👀

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:32 PM

Totally unrelated to this, I remembered that on my old doors live cassette he started singing 'Little Red Rooster' have you heard this concert🎸

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:40 PM

@naaviie hehehe happens from time to time babe 😘

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:41 PM

@sjw Mwah Mwah 💋💋 😉

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:42 PM

@wolfie Hahahaha what can I say mate, I'm an emotional wreck Lmfao 😜 thank you for the kind repost 🍻

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:43 PM

@glen yay 4 farting monkeys lol 😉 yeah heard that tune mate, live version at the hollywood bowl???

Jun 18, 2012 at 5:48 PM

I wouldn't mind seeing more of these 😜✨

Jun 18, 2012 at 7:11 PM

Forget soppy-I think it's beautiful & full of romance. And everyone knows, most girls are suckers for that😉😘

Jun 18, 2012 at 10:03 PM

@smellyfingers love it - very cute. A side to u I

Jun 18, 2012 at 10:04 PM

Didnt think existed lol xxx

Jun 18, 2012 at 10:18 PM

@naaviie pmsl that canbe arranged nic 😉

Jun 18, 2012 at 10:19 PM

@Fly10 thank you babes I'm very happy you like it, thank you 😘

Jun 18, 2012 at 10:20 PM

@Ria1984 thank you hun and yes I have written quite a few "romantic" poems in the past 😉 thank you for re-posting 😘

Jun 18, 2012 at 10:20 PM

@smellyfingers ooooo 😜😘

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