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I Won't Quit

I won't! Quit
really? Understood?
Why? It's happened! Hear?
I can't. Move
now? Paranoid
breathing. Not too easy?
I think! I'm a bit paralysed.
It's just so so! Really? Dark
sounds. Like my heart?
Beating this? Feelings.
Think? I may be. Bleeding
heavy? Hed
onwards. This is better -
unusual. Senses
Unusual? Senseless
me? Death?
Not. Drip fed.
Confusion? Spreds
outside. Inside known? Movements
no! Fun? Amused? By me
side. Bye? My sides
No. Times two dice.
Goodbye?

I don't know it's been a weird old day, Lmfao :-)

smellyfingers

@smellyfingers

Asking lots of questions and thinking through the ones that are unanswered!! Kik: smellyfingers soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/smellyfingers

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Epic!! You're amazing :)

@minni92 haha thanks and so are you :-) did you read it without the punctuation too? XxX

@smellyfingers I read it both ways which gives me too different outlooks but always fantastic ! :) xx

Glad to read you :)

@minni92 haha that's good then Mwah xxx

@Weirdwolf thanks mate. Almost had writers block but then remembered I was just tiered Lmfao :-)

@smellyfingers I get it sometimes, and then I just have to remember to forget I've got it ;)

And thank you kindly for the repost @minni92 ;-) xxxx

Great epic love it! Random days are the best! 😊

@smellyfingers you are more than welcome ;) xx

Great stuff man, came across really well, or not but that's the point.πŸ˜‰ nice one😊

@Weirdwolf haha yeah that's the 1 mate :-)

@aleishagayle20 thank you honey. Mwah xxx

@Stablish thanks mate. Yeah its a bit weird Lool :-)

@smellyfingers weird is relative. Late night rocking! Great!

@smellyfingers you're a weirdo(love it) :)

@leelee101 @sark haha thanks guys ;-)

Great work!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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