If I look after you
In time will you help me too
Will you be well prepared
In knowledge to share
To lean on and guide
To wipe tears from eyes
Spare me a little time
Tell me I'm doing fine
Will you read between the lines
Will you recognise my signs
I have experienced hated love
I have set free my peaceful dove
When the sun goes down
Will you be my loveable clown
Will you keep me smiling thru
When my dark clouds are in view
To be a friend and be my mate
To be honest and don't hesitate
Tell it to me and be straight
Don't just say I'll be fine, I'm doing great
As new seasons come and pass
And my mind races too fast
Will you listen to my words
Will you always be here first
On you I can depend
My inner me, my reliable friend
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Comments & Feedback (24)
@Fly10 hey babe! Think LivingDeadGirl is aleisha, look at writing style and bad grammar and content ππ
The first few I completely bought into, but having last couple a bit off key, & having reread all & looked at who she's following (same 3names always appear DuRo etc) I think you may be right. She's being very careful in her comments this time isn't she? No mwah/smilies/endless banter etc! Is her kid a boy do you know? Great spot by the way!ππ
@Fly10 she made a post yesterday about building a tower (same as she did as aleisha, influenced by weirdwolf poem) but soon deleted it, lol. She has a iPad and iPhone so think only 1 got banned, maybe, someone asked her if it was her on kik and obviously she denied it. She has a daughter, think she covering her arse by saying she has a job and a boy. It's either an extremely accurate coincidence or it's her or duro pen name, she liked his poem "the rulers" lol. It's a bit fishy the grammar and writing style and content so just giving you a heads up hun ππβ€
a lot cleverer this time! Check out first few sections of 'Not My God' & compare against 'Heaven Shunned' on her favourite Deep Underground site. I'll report it all on Monday anyway, as soon as I'm home & have a full & reliable connection. Hope you're good babe ππ
@Fly10 Jesus Christ!! I have joined that site a few days ago, will private message the author to make him/her aware of it!!! Damn you're good Leigh, lol. Mwah! Btw my poem "in your eyes" is for you βΊππ
Is it really? That's the most beautiful thing I think anyone had ever written for me-how can that be? I can only guess that people have the ability to reach each other on so many different levels...& on here, you & I just maybe are on a level? πβ€π Re our faker, I've been trying to trace her fake pieces for a while, but she's been a lot smarter this time ( in her comments too). I knew that sooner or later she'd trip herself up though. I think there's actually an option on that site to 'compose your own' whereby they give you the basic structure, & you 'choose' a random word to fit within a given paragraph. Hence, it maybe difficult to trace the TRUE original author of the piece I mentioned. 'Heaven Shunned' is just one example of a poem that utilises the first paragraph of her piece-if you type in the first few lines(or Google it) there are loads of others. Either way, as far as I view it, it's not her work, as I'm sure the others aren't. Just hope the boss listens to me & deals with it immediately....unlike last time π Thanks for listening ππ
@Fly10 yes I had you in mind when I wrote it, thinking about your spirit, strength and emotions in your poems, your honesty and trust in me ect ect. In it I say "I will not name you" but I just wanted you to know β€π (p.s. I'm not a weird stalker or psycho Lmfao you inspired me is all hun x) re: that site, I will pm the author (he has another poem almost identical too) and see what he says about it. I have warned a few "top" members on opuss about her and 1 has already reported her, lol you know she takes my poems too right? My ideas and kind of replies to my poems (dunno if you picked up on it yet?) she also told me on kik that she emails my poems to herself and I was like wtf? She said panicked and said they make her smile and calm her or some crap.......all makes sense now grrrr π‘
She a confirmed psycho-that's the only explanation. And yes, I had noticed that she'd 'pick up on a theme' and cobble together pieces which mirrored what others had written. She does similar in comments too-copied a 'long' word that someone else has already used. Her basic grammar is poor, hence it stands out a mile (I think) when she then posts a piece with more intricate language. And one of hers (I think it's 'Don't Judge Me or smthin like that ) is an exact copy from what I remember, of one of her Aliesha pieces. I've reported it all this a.m so just hope that unlike last time, she's shut down immediately. ππ
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