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Why Won't You Let Me Go?

Why won't you let me be?
I don't want to live in abject poverty.
I want too fly and be free,
From life's pessimistic entities

Why don't you listen to me?
I can open up your mind to glorious possibilities.
We can fly and live how we're supposed to, you'd see.
Smug in future memories.

Why won't you ever see?
Why do you cling on to me?
Why won't you just set me free?
Why do you always need me to achieve? I believe, I did, indeed decree
My love, I am just me, please let me be.

All that I am I have given over
To you, and asked for nothing in return,
only for you to open up your heart and soul,
You have rivers of gold
Flowing through you, you know,
You have eyes that shine and fill me with unconditional, infinite, love.
You WILL always be mine.
You WILL always be fine.
I will always be with you, you know,
You know I LOVE YOU,
But please just let me go.

Now I am gone.
And oh how I do so much want
For you to see me shine,
Can you see me shine?
In memories of me and you in our prime.
It was a wondrous, glorious, happy time.
The time when you was mine.
I just want you to know, tho,
I never truly did want to go.

smellyfingers

@smellyfingers

Asking lots of questions and thinking through the ones that are unanswered!! Kik: smellyfingers soundcloud: www.soundcloud.com/smellyfingers

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Comments & Feedback (7)

Great words my friend

@DaddyDooDahs thank you mate. I wrote this while on the throne, loool when it comes, it comes (words that it) :-)

@smellyfingers lmfao!!!

Brilliant, as per!

@Cam thank you babe x

Did you run out of words with an 'ee' rhyme?! Great poem though :)

@Nom yeah almost, so changed tempo, Lol

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