Wrap your arms around me
Shielded in your history
Bathe my mind in mystery
Changing life's - our destiny
Wrap your words around me
Guided in your sanctuary
Laughing in ill company
Wasted life's - don't pity
Wrap your legs around me
Blinded by profanity
Releasing all your jealousy
Another life - we can't feed
Wipe your tears in front of me
Weeping for humanity
Shedding all humility
A higher race - we all believe
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H eavenly bliss replaces the woe. A sweet scent flows with grace. R oam about free to come and go. M omentous , a glorious place. O ut of sight are fears that plagued.
You thought I'd gone, I thought so too But something pulled me back Dancing on the edge of hell Peering into black I thought I'd gain my other life At the expense of words But poetry has drawn me...
A thousand stars,. In the sky,. Two hundred wishes,. Way up high,. A hundred ways,. To say hello,. Ten thousand ways,. To let it go,. Three hundred miles,. Into my heart,. A thousand steps,.
I have been pondering for a while Of petty things that took me a thousand miles The thought of you gave me a smile Swept away this thing they call black bile You were once a stranger I know nothing...
Tomorrow Land October 24 2010 Passion boil Never toil With what is ought to stay Never prick me with that splendor For what i'd often pray Little bird your wings are clipped Her window shut and...
Weave a web of wishes Look to all the trees What web would you choose For your thoughts to be free.
The cruelness of wasted life. Locked inside a prism of hate. Fuelled by a design that's rife. Padlocked behind white gates. How does one escape the tears. The solitude and sanctuary.
Improv challenge set by @naaviie Words: driftwood, mirror, friction, letter, jigsaw, release.
@meganelisabeth wow, thanks. Isn't it funny how some like stuff more than others, lol only took 10mins to do, while having a fag break :-) glad you liked it
@smellyfingers always the way! What I feel is my best work barely anyone's liked however my more average stuff is proving more popular! Weird lol. I find with stuff that took no time it works better because I haven't nitpicked over it and spent ages changing and over thinking. Comes more from the heart then too so is clearer!
@meganelisabeth yeah I know hun, less thinking more writing, lol I tend to just write what I'm thinking and I write on iPhone in the "notes" feature, so for me, it's easier to get it all out, predictive text helps, I'm dyslexic and punctuation isn't my strongest thing, lol it may sound weird but when I write I kind of get tunnel vision and zone out, sometimes I try to put myself in the mind of the subject I'm talking about (how would they feel, what would they say, how would they react ect ect) I was rubbish at school and left at 14 and only started writing 2-ish months ago, so I'm still new and learning new ways to say things and do things. I'm blown away by the support and comments, truly amazing. Thanks again x
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