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Ruth Forest.

For a 500 word competition for Chris Evans :)

I was running, I couldn't stop. He was after me, they were after me. If I stopped, even for a split second, they'd catch me. Catch and kill - that was there motto. They were the hunters, and they were hunting me. Like Hitler and the blonde haired blue eyed Germans, I had brown hair, and green eyes.
This is a totally different generation though, I was running from pirates, yes, pirates. They'd taken over England, Captain. Swishergold sits where the Queen sat, I wish it still was the Queen. I personally don't see how her bodyguards didn't save her from those bullets, but, I suppose, God Save the Queen.

Everyone had left the country, fled to France or The Rep. of Ireland. That's where I was heading, Ireland. Suddenly, I heard a gun fire from behind me, it zoomed past me and hit a near by tree. It missed me by inches.
I'd not stopped running yet, I hadn't a clue where I was running to, but I had just passed a sign that read Liverpool. I could hear waves lapping against the sand.

I could be free, finally.
My mum and family left me. I woke up one morning to find them gone, no note, nothing. Just like they evaporated out of thin air. My little sister, Libby, had blonde hair, blue eyes. She got taken away by 'the crew' a few months ago. Never to be seen on the streets again. A salty tear made it's way down my pale cheek and dripped off my chin.

I'd reached the coastline, boats were lined up against the rocks at the far end of the beach. I sprinted, I put all my energy in this run, I had to make it. I couldn't die at 13, me, Ruth Forrest. My brown hair reaching my shoulders and my green eyes like a cats, were darting everywhere. Finally, I had made it to the rowing boat. I pushed it out towards the ocean, with not far to go, sadly, I heard a scream of agony right after a streak of bullets. They were close.

The little rowing boat had made it to the sea, the clouds above us forming a storm. At the minute though, all I cared about was my safety, not my beauty/looks.

The waves soared around me, it felt like hours before I saw it, land. 'Land ahoy..' I muttered, and brushed a murky hand into my greasy hair. Ireland, here I come.

ten years later

"-and you may now kiss the bride." The vicar announced, as my new best friend celebrated my wedding.
I was now married, had a good job, lived in a good house. Shows what you can do if you commit to it, like I did running and rowing and finding a few job.

Hi, my name is Ruth Forrest, I am 23 years old...

I escaped the pirates.

^^500 WORDS^^
If I get a lot of likes (like 20 or somert) I'm considering entering this in the 500 WORDS competition, it'll be the last time I get to do it. Please give me feedback and constructive criticism - thanks xxxxx

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I'm going to write till I die. I'll write stories, music, poetry and I guarantee that I will post half of it on here. Keep a look out! Xx

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Comments & Feedback (21)

Wow! That is Soooo good. Enter it!!!

@OfMonstersAndMen thanks sooo much (;

@Tweedledee @Jesusfreak7 @UnionJg @Petitpois22 @HeatherAnne please read to check if its good? Xxxx

Thats pretty good.

I think you should enter this competition πŸ‘ what exactly is it, may I ask? πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘β€

@Jesusfreak7 thanks!! Xx how can I make it better? I've got like 20 words left xx

@BethyBoo it's a competition in the UK. BBC2's news reader (I think), Chris Evans, is running a competition for 13 and younger. The prize is his height in books (he's like 6' somert) and someone famous (like Daniel Radcliffe) will read it out on the radio xxxxx

@tattyteddy ooh! You should go for it! You'll have to keep us all posted on it though! 😊x

@BethyBoo thanks for the support :) xxx will do ☺😘 xxx

I like it....I find it hard to write these types if stories, you seem very talented. Good luck with the comp πŸ‘πŸ‘

@tattyteddy try making it a little more descriptive maybe?

@patdolan83 thank you sooooo much :) @Jesusfreak7 okay, I'll see what I can do (; cxx

Noooo don't enter this is so good I have no chance of winning! This is a truly brilliant story :)

@tattyteddy okay:)

@sian_ lol! Thanks :) xxxx

@OfMonstersAndMen @Jesusfreak7 @BethyBoo @patdolan83 @sian_ I've entered :D the website said they will let me know what stage my story is up too on the judging panel by the end of march :) xxx thanks soo much for your support xxx

@tattyteddy good luck

@Jesusfreak7 thanks xxx I've posted the exact one I submitted, again it's called Ruth Forrest. :) xxx

@tattyteddy can u still enter or has the competition closed? Xxx

Doesn't matter xxx

@UnionJg i don't know xx

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