Part 5
92yrs later
"A happy family!
Our family had increased now, I was married to Emmet - best wedding ever!
I had a new sister and brother, who - like Emmet and I - have fallen in love: Alice and Casper.
The two are seriously a dodgy pair. Her with her foreseeing thingy and him with his mood shifting ability........well made pair?!
Anyway, we all live in a small town, we are actually planning a move - starting fresh.
We are moving to another small town called PitchFork, weird name - I know - but it's quiet and peaceful and full of animals!" I wrote in my diary, just until my lead snapped - I suppose for the better, me and Emmet were going to go out hunting. The last time hunting here, full of mountain lion and grizzly bear ( Emmets favourite -) my favourite is Deer - the type like Bambi!
"Heh babe, wanna go hunting?" Emmet asked me, talking up the stairs - no need for shouting - we could hear each other perfectly fine!
I accepted the offer and gracefully jumped out of the window - big drop, loads of strength - not a place of hair untacked.
Emmet was waiting for me down below.
"Hey, Emmet?" I said to him, walking (racing) towards the woods,
"Yeah rose?"
"Y'know Fredde, do you think he will ever find love as good as this?" I asked, he furrowed his eye brows,
"What brought this up?!" he smiled and looked confused at the same time,
"Well- it's just that - I feel bad. Showing how much we love each other infront of him - he looks lonely babe. I feel for him," I said, getting in my deer murdering position, a snarl ripped from my throat. 1less deer in the world, I frowned at that thought,
"Fred will find love - dont worry for him. Anyway, we are starting school tomorrow, better get back," he said before looking at his expensive watch,"Hey, race ya!" he grinned and sped of before stopping about a mile infront of me to yell "GO!!!"
Urghh! So annoying yet so adorably cute ;)
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@Platypus because they are vampires, which means they are forever young (@LeahLovesEC haha ;) ) and if they are going to start fresh they need to enrol at school otherwise it's against the law! ;) xox
@tattyteddy Twilight? So I've read it all, I think there are places in it were it lacks a little in description but more often than not its good. And (I realise I'm going to sound like my English teacher but bare with me) it all happens very quickly like her accepting she's a vampire, you could've gone into detail on her emotions, how she feels seeing Carlisle? Do the same to Emmet. Just a thought but keep writing x
@PokeMaster96 thanks - the reason for lack of description is rushing?! writing comes quite naturally to me - description: I have to think about! Xox thanks for your advice xox doubt your English teacher is that awesome!! Teachers generally bore me - you didn't! ;) next 'who am I?!' xox
@DrewTexas this is where everything falls into place like 1st twilight......@LeahLovesEC @Platypus @Twilightianalex @PokeMaster96 please welcome........REBECCA (BECCA for short!) haha xox
@tattyteddy haha lol my English teacher was awesome but I've left that school now so I'll probably never see him again unfortunately =( he was also distracting if you get what I mean ;) also quick secret Lewis is a rough description of him lol ;D I don't really get bored with teachers I generally have a laugh with teachers talk to them more they make things more interesting when you do end up with random in-class jokes lol xD x
@tattyteddy will be up tomorrow I realise I've gone a little in-depth with this part =/ almost made myself cry ='S which is worrying may have to edit this part more x
@LeahLovesEC hahaha :) Er....who's your second favourite guy from Twilight (not jasper or Emmet or Carlisle.....if it was him?) haha xox I'll see what I can do x
@tattyteddy Edward...Edward...Edward....Edward....Edward and Edward! You could make someone up though....
@LeahLovesEC jacob.....Seth? Hehe - or I could make up some distant relative of Fredwards......? The distant relative will probs be near the end of the whole story Though! xox
@LeahLovesEC @PokeMaster96 @DrewTexas @Georgiastar @Platypus @Twilightianalex next chapters out of Why Me? and This is just life, soโฆget reading!! ;) xox
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