Love Hurt

tetti2 • 255 followers

If anyone fancy's writing a reply from the partner that would be so cool tag me so I can read!

A love I cannot touch,
God I want you so much.

Hanging on your every word,
True love in denial seems absurd.

Talking for hours in touch all the time,
Wanting your body is my only crime.

Sitting alone now in my room writing a letter just for you-

A letter to you here's what I have to say I know your heart has got up gone away, I sent you a message three days ago the lack of reply has told me what I needed to know. You could have cooled off in a kinder way told me that your heart has got up and now gone astray, the silent treatment wasn't what I needed, can't live alone that decision is now seeded. I'm sitting alone with a bottle of gin unpopping the pills from there plastic tin. Watching the clock in an hour or so's time, my body will be sleeping and all will be fine.
Enjoy your life I hope you'll be happy, a love that's so strong that's left me so crappy.

Take care I love you x

#emotional-pain #general #heartbreak #relationship-drama #suicide-ideation #unrequited-love

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Comments & Feedback (12)

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:25 PM

@BethyBoo thank you reposting x

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:42 PM

@tetti2 really sad but very good Terri!! 👏😘

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:44 PM

@gazplend thanks started as a soppy poem but got bored so mashed it up haha. @sjw cheers for Reposts you two x

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:46 PM

@tetti2 I might work in a reply might be tomorrow tho 😊

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:46 PM

On*

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:48 PM

@sjw look forward to it 😊

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:53 PM

@tetti2 @sjw I can do a reply but it'll be cruel and heartless and sarcastic! 😁😘

Dec 30, 2012 at 8:55 PM

@gazplend Gaz that is perfect I look forward to it, so not into mush at the minute

Dec 30, 2012 at 9:10 PM

Great stuff hun. Good to see you've got takers for the reply. 👍❤😘👏

Dec 30, 2012 at 9:13 PM

@leelee101 yep I was going to reply myself but thought I'd throw it out there first for entertainment

Dec 30, 2012 at 9:13 PM

@leelee101 thanks for RP 😘❤

Dec 30, 2012 at 9:17 PM

@tetti2 welcome hun. I think it's good when two styles reply to each other. ❤

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