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The Parting

In the short ten minutes we'd spent with you,
wrapped in swaddle of cotton blue,
We sat in awe and silent gaze,
and shared one breath through sun lit rays.

We studied a face in contoured flow,
in elbowed cradle and rocking slow,
and recognised a mother's face
through eyes of close and reflected grace.

In mirror'd line drawn of nurtured genes
A wish of three, and genie'd dreams.
You're everything a family needs
in life of eternal love exceeds.

But we wait forlorn for silent cries,
only sadly met with long goodbyes.
A boy perfect, with skin lukewarm
We part on lips of kiss stillborn.

zero7four

@zero7four

I may be 50 now, but I still feel 19....especially when I write.

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Comments & Feedback (8)

Ridiculously sad and heartbreaking ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ’” yet beautifully expressed ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ’š

Beautiful ๐Ÿ’š๐Ÿ˜”

Unbelievably sad. But a great write ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘โค

Sad but lovely! ๐Ÿ˜ข

A truly heartbreaking thing to happen to anyone yet you express it beautifully ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”โœจโœจ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”

I wasn't sure if this would capture the sense of sadness parents must feel... so I thank you all for your kind comments.. @naaviie @eddie12309 @leelee101 @crowncottage @misslittleDHP

I think it captures it perfectly and also the peacefulness of such a tragic event. ๐Ÿ‘

@eddie12309 oh I'm so glad you sensed peacefulness as I originally called it 'In Silence'

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