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In all the 329 years, 4 months, 6 days I've lived,
I've seen chamber pots filled and long since emptied.
Many moons have passed, songs sung and toasts praised,
Drinks from horns, goblets, tankards and shot glasses raised.

Friends gone to dust, new families brought up and fed,
Lost short change and bundles of bread.
Dreams develop, goals transform into achievements
And successes become lost stories once said.

The stuff of it is difficult to place, pain and pleasure,
Flowing changes to a familiar human race.
Many wars and peace time battles treasure,
Such is this string tied tongue embrace.

Hold my stick in the wind and pull,
Climb from root to tip, amongst knurled limbs.
Make your mark, up-right and tight, full,
Pass kindred spirits, toward eternal springs.

One day at a time, written upon this face.
One more day, the ever longest yet,
Love each moment, give all, never forget.
Grow tall, be proud to survive, breathe again,
Resign to age at a strengthening pace.

Only in time when all is complete,
Let go, release to fall upon the earth
Having knowledge, deserving, discreet,
Die laughing, fulfilled in every worth.

Copyright Ⓒ 2012 Christopher Patrick Kirk all rights reserved

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Here, there and everywhere... LLAP!!!

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Wonderful imaginative writing full of rich expression. Excellent 😌

A life truly embraced. Love how this flows at different speeds depending on what stage in life you are describing. This piece is a favourite of mine. 💛

Was pondering the title and first line. Do they refer to an oak tree? I just had the feeling that this poem was about life lived but also at times it felt as though it was looked at from a different angle and some of the imagery lent towards and agelessness (is that a word?) not found in humans. Or am I way off the mark?😳

@jojo72 Spot on and thanks for reading...

This is great, I really like it and want to know more! 😊

I really enjoyed this one, a good use of imaginative words :)

Really love this...great use of exquisite words😃😃😃😃😍😍😍

This is really clever, when I see some of the old oak trees in londons parks I often think about the changes they have witnessed this beautifully captures that 💞❇

@crowncottage @mel1984 @misslittleDHP @sjw I'm taken aback with all these positive comments, thank you, much appreciated... :)))

@Barknbite truly deserved💗💚💗💚

@Barknbite I agree with @misslittleDHP it is well deserved!

Will there be more to this piece ? I enjoyed it and would love to read more. 👍😃

@Lovinmalamutes Never say never, so glad you liked...

Oh I hope there will be more in future. But it's an excellent piece on its own! BTW I do my best to not say NEVER, if life is involved!

Lol, never always happens when you least expect it. Lol

@Barknbite Tom just read this poem, he told me - If a piece of writing doesn't stir you in some way then it's not a poem, just verse and this is a poem! ☺ he liked it.

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