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Okay, so I've been waiting a couple weeks to post this poem. I wanted to post it tomorrow for the advent challenge but this is my 500th opuss so I thought, why not use this one? So here it is :) ...

Oh how your blue eyes shone tonight
When dusk turned to twilight
And the stars glimmered for you
Because they love your beauty too

I remember how you kissed me
How you made me finally see
Then I opened my eyes
And you were staring back at me

They started to count down
Not one person wore a frown
But that didn't matter to me
Because you were the one I could see

And when they got to one
When the night was finally done
You took me in your arms
Showered me with your charms

You kissed me right there
Under the moon's glare
And that was when I really found
That you was going to stick around

BethyBoo

@BethyBoo

18 year old student, loving opuss and the people I've met along the way <3 ... Kik: Bethlin

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👏👏👏That's a big milestone Beth, very well done hun and here's to many more 👍❤😘

@leelee101 thank you lee ☺ I still can't believe I've done that many 😄👍❤

Congrats on your 500th 👏👏👏😘💝💐

@BethyBoo happy 500 Beth! And a great write too 👏❤😘💐

@sjw thank you sienna ☺ and thank you for the repost ☺👍❤

@gazplend thanks gaz ☺, I've been excited to share it, couldn't wait any longer. Thank you for the repost ☺👍❤

Congrats on 500 👏😱👏😱

@chickgamer thank you hun ☺👍❤

A fabulous write Hun and woop woop for your 500th post...that is unbelievable...here's to many more my sweet 🍸🌹🍸🌹🍸🎉🎐🎁👏✨

@misslittleDHP thank you Kim ☺, still can't believe I'm at 500 👍😄. Thank you for the repost ☺👍❤

@BethyBoo very nice!

@BethyBoo you deserve it Hun 👏😘🍸

@Klaire thank you for the repost hun ☺👍❤

@twinks thank you ☺👍

Nice poem:) Congrats on your 500th...Wish you many more. Xx

@Blueblotts thank you hun ☺👍❤

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