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Teens

Blonde hair
Long and fair
Eyes ocean blue
Looking through you
Top loose, exposing
Good for posing.
Jeans designer brand
Made by hand
Shoes expensive as hell
Bag as well
Makeup applied
With celebrities in mind
Hairspray and dye
Uneducated mind

I stand there
I stand and stare…

Eyes and hair brown
Worn loosely down
Clothes cheap from the store
Shoes worth a bit more
No bag on my shoulder
No clip or hair-holders
Glasses on my nose
But heaven knows
How they say this is "reem"
How stupid are teens?
Dressing to impress boys
Who use them as toys…

Bobdimmer

@Bobdimmer

I write to live. I live to write.

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Great message, well delivered! ☺👏

I can relate, I was the "nerd" with the glasses and cheaper clothes. And for that I was treated differently when I was in school.

Good stuff 👍❤👏👏

You are amazing, proud to call you my best friend <3

@tashiba yeah that's me :) xx still in school though lol

@leelee101 thank you ✨❤

@sian_ why thank you, although the amazing part isn't true ✨❤

It is stop being hard on yourself

@sian_ ily ✨❤

Great message well done 👏👏👏😘

Thanks @sjw ✨❤

Lovely poem! 💐💜😘

@LittleKitten thankyou 😊✨❤

Wow. #4 in today's most popular. I'm proud that's the most likes I've ever had on an opuss. Thank you everyone for the rps and likes 😘😘 ✨❤

OH MY GOSH THIS IS GREAT<3 hahaha. I always think this stuff.. Seeing so many of those girls in my preppy, annoying school. I've never thought about writing a poem about it though. But if I had, THIS WOULD BE EVERYTHING I HAD TO SAY. But written 10x better than I could ever put it lol. ❤👍👍👍

Try it and tag me in the comments, I'd like to see it, I'm sure it'd be great <3✨❤

LOVE this. Girls don't understand, they won't find a guy worth their time by spending money on stuff. Perfectly put.

That's amazing

@major_jpayne thankyou ✨❤

I'm speechless.. Dono wt to say.. It's.. AMAZING.

Thanks ✨❤

@Oj ^

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