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Dark Figures

Chapter 1~
Joanne's POV
It was just a normal day. I was sitting on my couch watching TV when I heard the loud, and unforgiving knock at my apartment door.
Still half asleep I get up and answer the door. I peep through the little glass hole in my door to see who it is. It's a police officer. Why is he here? He knocks again, acting impatient. I pull the squeaky door open and ask him if he wanted to come inside. He refused my offer.
"This kind of news isn't always easy to tell." He says to me while removing his hat.
"What news?" I asks still confused.
"Well, last night a body was found at the end of an alley... He was taken back to the station to run tests on an well, that body was your brother."
I stare at him shocked.
"What?" I ask.
"I'm sorry but I must be going." His hat returns to the top of his head and he walks away.
I close the door, crawl onto the couch and I ball my eyes out until they have no more tears to shed. Deuce, my dog, hops up onto the couch to see what's wrong. He licks my face in attempt to cheer me up. After an hour or so, I reach for my phone. I immediately call my parents.
"Hello?" My dad answered the phone.
"Daddy." I say, chocking back tears. "Lucas- Lucas.."
I start crying again.
"Joanne, what happened?" My mom had apparently snatched the phone from my father's hand.
Still crying, I tell her the story. Half way through I can hear her starting to cry. Along with her is my father in the background.
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A/N: Sorry it's kinda short but I'm new at writing crime stories.. So yeah.. Please leave comments and tips!!
T-Hanks!
Morgan 

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I'm just gonna try my best :) Kik~Bubblegum07 ((: Thanks!

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Very good I love it

@beth4856 Thanks, I didn't think it was very good cause this is my first crime book (:

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