Olivia had now arrived at the prison where Kyle was.It was a old,rusty and smelly building.The police officer had come with her so she knew what to do (as Olivia wasn't a police officer herself and she didn't know this prison at all) "Kyle is in cell 214" the police officer said,to break the awkward silence hanging in the room."Ok"Olivia replied,in a nervous tone.
Finally Olivia's dread had come real.She and the officer had reached cell 214.There she saw Kyle.He was rough looking, a bit chavvy too.
Kyle was muscular and was covered in tattoos,rather like one of those prisoners on TV programmes."Kyle you have a visitor" the policeman announced.
"What's she doin 'ere?" said Kyle,"I dunno 'er."
"Hello Kyle,my name is Olivia Bones and I'm here to find out a case about a
massmurder of 10 people"
"I didn't do it",Kyle replied bluntly,"I 'avent done anyfink since I came 'ere 6 months ago"
"That's true",replied the police officer,"Kyle hasn't committed any crime since he came here"
"Then who dunnit?" asked Kyle
"I don't know Kyle"Olivia stated....
Chapter IIIII
This truly was a day Olivia hated.The day she visited her dad.
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