Chapter 2~
Joanne's POV
A few days later my boyfriend, Vince, walks through the door of my apartment.
"Joanne I'm back.." He says while looking around the apartment.
I walk out of the bathroom with my hair tied up into a messy bun on top of my head.
"Ya know, you look pretty weird in that suit." I say to him.
His large, muscular figure looks strained in his tight suit.
"I know," he says. "I hate wearing suits."
He loosens his tie and sets his suit case on the kitchen table.
"So how did the meeting go?" I ask him.
"Uh, it was, good.. I guess."
"So do you think you got the job?"
"Uh, I don't know.." He grabs a can of pop and cracks it open.
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A/N: Hey guys! So I'm having trouble with this story... This story might never be finished but I don't know yet. I know who murdered Joanne's brother already but I'm having trouble with fitting all of the prices together.. :L So I might just stop this story and head straight to continuing 11:11... So, give meh some feedback (:
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Here's some advice: u could have a a funeral for her bro or she finds his ghost in the same ally here bro died
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