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Casualty Of War

Crouched - in a hole, lone;
death bullets circle his home.
Child, stranger to calm.

Fear - a common foe,
That visits with every shot.
Trapped, nowhere to go.

Panic - never far,
Unease is all that greets him.
Nothing left but scars.

Home; this snow filled trench
Olfactory overload
Deaths coppery stench

Battle - on the edge,
Ready to step forth today
leap over the ledge.

Dreams- are all he has,
Where innocence is not dead,
and blood is not shed.

Childhood spent in fear,
Love, fun, happiness - unknown,
No family; alone.

Desensitised; numb,
A soldier, out of his depth
Who has not yet wept.

Suppressed; out of sight,
His dreams and hopes
Will they ever see the light?

Innocence - lost going over the top
Another child dead
When will it stop?

Contributors;

@Yikici
@Jamtots
@Stablish
@leelee101
@BethyBoo
@minxyMolly
@Irrational_Kimmi
@sjw
@sarahgamal
@Burrfoot

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Following the lines you have written, tag another wonderful Opussian to continue with a haiku - who we will encourage to tag another Opussian and so forth until the piece comes to a natural end declared by the last writer of the piece - who will in turn choose an appropriate name for finished piece. :-)

Each contributor will be required to tag in the predecessors of the piece so we can all follow the developments together. Please tag it;

Burrfoot

@Burrfoot

Getting there, one step at a time

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Comments & Feedback (16)

Brilliant brilliant excellent ending... Bravo πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@sarahgamal cheers belle πŸ˜” watching red nose day and seeing the child suffering .. In a somber mood

Perfect ending Burr, nicely doneπŸ˜”πŸ‘Œ

πŸ‘πŸ‘ ... @Burrfoot been watching it too πŸ˜” ... Great ending πŸ‘

Thanks @Stablish @BethyBoo quite emotional πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺπŸ˜”

Apologies for then non haiku .. Hadn't realised 😳

@Burrfoot I wouldn't worry mate, you've seen it off nicely mate πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜•

This is exactly where I wanted it to go πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@Burrfoot yea as @leelee101 said not to worry, this is a perfect ending for this piece, way to go. Great title too. (Next time pay attention to the syllables πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚) thank you & everyone participating, you guys are great sports. 😘 @Jamtots @sarahgamal @Stablish @BethyBoo @leelee101 @minxyMolly β˜ΊπŸ˜˜βœ¨πŸ’πŸ’—

@sjw @Irrational_Kimmi see above ⬆⬆⬆

@sarahgamal @Stablish @BethyBoo ⬆⬆⬆

@leelee101 @Jamtots @minxyMolly ⬆⬆⬆

(Sorry Burr, forget I had more than 3-6 tags -still sleepy 😳)

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