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Crouched - in a hole, lone;
death bullets circle his home.
Child, stranger to calm.

Fear - a common foe,
That visits with every shot.
Trapped, nowhere to go.

Panic - never far,
Unease is all that greets him.
Nothing left but scars.

Home; this snow filled trench
Olfactory overload
Deaths coppery stench

Battle - on the edge,
Ready to step forth today
leap over the ledge.

Dreams- are all he has,
Where innocence is not dead,
and blood is not shed.

Childhood spent in fear,
Love, fun, happiness - unknown,
No family; alone.

Desensitised; numb,
A soldier, out of his depth
Who has not yet wept.

Suppressed; out of sight,
His dreams and hopes
Will they ever see the light?

Contributors;

@Yikici
@Jamtots
@Stablish
@leelee101
@BethyBoo
@minxyMolly
@Irrational_Kimmi
@sjw
@sarahgamal

Proposed contributor:
@Burrfoot

The rules:

Following the lines you have written, tag another wonderful Opussian to continue with a haiku - who we will encourage to tag another Opussian and so forth until the piece comes to a natural end declared by the last writer of the piece - who will in turn choose an appropriate name for finished piece. :-)

Each contributor will be required to tag in the predecessors of the piece so we can all follow the developments together. Please tag it;

sarahgamal

@sarahgamal

A 32 mother of 2 .

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Comments & Feedback (27)

Irrational_kimmi @sjw

Not sure but it's midnight here so that's the best I can come up with 😁 now who is active now to tag next or is this the end lovely writers?

Brilliantly added. Great stuff Sarah. 😘✨

@sarahgamal @burrfoot is up -just been commenting of stuff 😘✨

@yikici ok great @Burrfoot you are up next 😁 pls

But if you feel it's reached a natural end then title it. 😘

@yikici I will leave it to Burr to decide now

@sarahgamal ok ☺✨

😳 been out at the cinema watching Oz (great film).. Cheers @sarahgamal could ya KIK me it so I can give it a look see πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

And while u are at it lovely peeps start writing ur thoughts and kik me it if you still want the behind the scenes 😘

Sarah you're syllables are off hun 😱

@sarahgamal Love it Sarah, I'll start writing up my thoughts soon, just cook some dinner😘

@leelee101 my who?

@sarahgamal your syllables. Haikus are 5 - 7 - 5 hunny, you got 5 - 4 - 7 ❀

@leelee101 this was a Haiku thing? I don't get the Haiku

@sarahgamal all the other parts are haikus sweety. I shouldn't worry now, it's still a great add hun 😘😘

@leelee101 πŸ˜”well I still dont get Haikus ... Well look it up for future reference then... Sorry messed up the syllables

@Stablish take ur time will work on it tomorrow ... Tired now😊

@sarahgamal forget it hun! Not worth the worry. As I said, a great add regardless. πŸ‘β€ Now, where's that Burr to see the thing off... 😘😘

@leelee101 😳 I didn't notice the haiku either

@Burrfoot the lesser spotted haiku... πŸ˜‚

My apologies to all don't really know Haikus and too tired to look it up and edit now... Will try tomorrow

@sarahgamal no problem sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 trust you to spot it this time πŸ˜‚ @sarahgamal @Burrfoot don't worry too much about it unless you really get your bees in a bonnet about it 😝 it's all good as it is. ☺@Burrfoot πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

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