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Crouched - in a hole, lone;
death bullets circle his home.
Child, stranger to calm.

Fear - a common foe,
That visits with every shot.
Trapped, nowhere to go.

Panic - never far,
Unease is all that greets him.
Nothing left but scars.

Home; this snow filled trench
Olfactory overload
Deaths coppery stench

Battle - on the edge,
Ready to step forth today
Leap over the ledge.

Contributors;

@Yikici
@Jamtots
@Stablish
@leelee101
@BethyBoo

Proposed contributor:
@minxyMolly

The rules:

Following the lines you have written, tag another wonderful Opussian to continue with a haiku - who we will encourage to tag another Opussian and so forth until the piece comes to a natural end declared by the last writer of the piece - who will in turn choose an appropriate name for finished piece. :-)

Each contributor will be required to tag in the predecessors of the piece so we can all follow the developments together. Please tag it;

BethyBoo

@BethyBoo

18 year old student, loving opuss and the people I've met along the way <3 ... Kik: Bethlin

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@yikici @Jamtots @Sablish @leelee101 hope this is okay guys 😘😘

@minxyMolly I choose you! πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜

Awesome, you've built it up ready for some action. Great additionπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Chaaaaarge! 😝 Great addition Beth πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Stablish @Jamtots πŸ’ͺπŸ’ͺ grrr let's get 'em!! Thanks guys 😝😘

@Jamtots @sammielee46 thank you both for the lovely reposts πŸ˜˜πŸ‘β€

Woo hoo -let the battle commence. Great addition @BethyBoo -what will happen next? 😳😱😘✨

I'm liking your battle cry lol πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@BethyBoo you forgot to add pikachu hehehe :3 alright cheers Beth xx

@minxyMolly aww I'm sorry! Maybe next time he'll battle πŸ˜„ want me to kik you it? 😘X

I just realised my stanza unintentionally rhymes... And now everyone else's rhymes... Whoops?

@yikici let's do this! Let us fight! πŸ˜‚πŸ’ͺ

@sjw thanks sienna πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‚

@Jamtots πŸ˜‚ brilliant!

@Jamtots yeah I was wondering that -after last nights interrogation. 😝 @BethyBoo I'm on it -lets goooooo lol πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜βœ¨

@yikici I was half asleep lol.. oh well, sorry 😜

@Jamtots lousy, lousy excuse πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

@yikici you're a lousy excuse! runs away crying

@Jamtots excuuuuse meee! flings a humungous pillow at @Jamtots πŸ˜πŸ˜‚βœ¨

Awesome Beth πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜β€πŸ‘

Just realise... You've got 6-5-7, isn't haikus 5-7-5? @leelee101

*realised

@BethyBoo she's right Beth, your syllables are off hun 😒 @yikici good spot, Oz 😘

@yikici @leelee101 LOL sorry!! πŸ˜‚ I'll see what I can do! 😘

@leelee101 I don't know what made me check, but a voice called out to me 😳 sorry @BethyBoo wasn't looking to cause trouble. 😳😳😳

@yikici naw it's fine, I'm just changing it now x. Thank you for letting me know πŸ˜„ ... Feel like an idiot now though πŸ˜‚

@BethyBoo don't be daft hun. I only learnt to count when I was 29... πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜πŸ’‹

@BethyBoo no dnt feel like that, @leelee101 picked up on one of my earlier haikus a week or so ago so it happens, just sweep it under the rug and whistle, no one will notice (I live in hope). lol

@yikici @leelee101 changed it now 😳😳 I'm so sorry! And now for the whistling 😚

@yikici @leelee101 hope it's okay now 😳

@BethyBoo whistling is good -I'll join in πŸ˜šπŸ˜—πŸ˜™I love the amendment now we need to let @sjw know 😘

@yikici 😚😚 do do dooo ... πŸ˜„ Sorry again!x

@yikici ??? what have I missed

@yikici oh the 5-7-5 thingy yes I'm clued up with that I think there's a few mistakes with others?

@BethyBoo well done Beth πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

@yikici nope ignore that my mistake 😘

@sjw can't see any hun 😘

@leelee101 @sjw @yikici sorry again guys! My mistake 😊😘

@leelee101 no my mistake hun duh does it matter which lines rhyme?

@leelee101 mostly it's 1st and third but the last couple are 2nd and 3rd

@sjw no hun they don't need to rhyme, I just prefer to make them rhyme, is all πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw actually classic haikus don't rhyme at all, I think we rhyme them through force of habit πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw I did first and second so it's a free-for-all πŸ˜‰ @leelee101

@yikici πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 yep that's very true. πŸ‘@sjw

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