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Crouched - in a hole, lone;
death bullets circle his home.
Child, stranger to calm.

Fear - a common foe,
That visits with every shot.
Trapped, nowhere to go.

Panic - never far,
Unease is all that greets him.
Nothing left but scars.

Home; this snow filled trench
Olfactory overload
Deaths coppery stench

Contributors;

@Yikici
@Jamtots
@Stablish
@leelee101

Proposed contributor:
@BethyBoo

The rules:

Following the lines you have written, tag another wonderful Opussian to continue with a haiku - who we will encourage to tag another Opussian and so forth until the piece comes to a natural end declared by the last writer of the piece - who will in turn choose an appropriate name for finished piece. :-)

Each contributor will be required to tag in the predecessors of the piece so we can all follow the developments together. Please tag it;

leelee101

@leelee101

Try to know a little about a lot. Not a lot about little.

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@BethyBoo You're up hun, if you want it. πŸ‘ I shall attempt to Kik it your way πŸ˜±πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜

πŸ˜”So sad...brilliant add Lee. πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

@yikici thank you sweety, seemed like the natural progression, so I went with it. πŸ‘ Thanks for the lovely RP Oz πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 yea, it's certainly heading that way unless someone sneaks in a cheeky twist (not putting any ideas in anyone's head). 😝😘✨

@HeatherAnne thanks for reposting Feef πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@sarahgamal thanks for reposting sweetheart πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@minxyMolly thanks for reposting babe πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Excellent πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Love it Sir, knew you would do it proud, I need the coffee now, it was a bit of a late one to say the leastπŸ˜‚β˜•β˜•β˜•πŸ‘

@sammielee46 thanks for reposting sweety πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@sjw thank you sweety, and a big πŸ’‹ smacker for the RP too πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@Stablish ahh cheers fella, it came straight to mind, just had to find the time to do it. Busy busy day mate. πŸ‘ Thanks for reposting bro πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜•πŸ»

Poem is turning out great so far. very nice addition, Lee. @Stablish pass the coffee, 5am poem writing is exhausting. I slept in πŸ˜‚

@Jamtots thank you Jammy, I thought it might when I saw the first parts this morning. πŸ‘ Thanks for reposting mate β˜•β˜•

@Jamtots β˜•β˜•β˜•β˜• There you go mate, I woke up at twelve but was trust straight into running round like a nutter. I'm so counting down the hours till 10pm now, my week off can't come any soonerπŸ‘πŸ‘

*Thrust

@LiSaC64 appreciate that lovely RP hunny πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

Sorry lee, only just got in 😘 great addition though 😊

@BethyBoo thanks hun, and a big πŸ’‹ for the RP too πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

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