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Days Gone

When I first joined, after a prompt from the App Store in its first few days of existence, I instantly downloaded it. What I discovered was a rare, magical world where things were friendly and intimate, and the passion was for creativity. It seemed almost like a communist state, where all could be heard, and decisions agreed upon. I remember @AlexMurray was number 2 in the ranks. I was 0, as everyone is to begin with. My first follower was a triumph, yet it took much time for me to be heard. Yet this may be seen by hundreds.

I began my time here, in this once great, little country of writers, thinkers and poets (and politicians!) with a little fantasy story. It was only a beginning. I never finished it. I received a couple of helpful comments. Yes, not many saw it, but Opuss was still so small that it didn't matter. It still entered the minds of a couple.

But times change, and rapidly. I remember when one little boy (whose name escapes me) plagiarised work on Opuss and there was an outcry. He was hammered into the ground by the angry mob of Opuss Land. Then pity seeped in, and we realised that we were turning into monsters. We thought about it, discussed it on notice boards across Opuss. We we like a small town, and everyone knew about it.

But even that was long ago. No, Opuss is so vast that I fear we have forgotten this. We are now a huge city, where no one truly cares others. Trolling can flourish in this faceless, cosmopolitan mess. It is becoming the YouTube of the writing world. The encouragement is still there, but not as strong. We have lost our mild-mannered nature that I so loved. It is no one in particular's fault. In growing worlds his is a part of what is natural. But I do not like it.

@AlexMurray eventually took that extra leap and became number 1 in the ranks. The old ranks that barely shifted at the top. Totalitarian, perhaps, but familiar, and familiarity is something that helps maintain peace. We are not liking change. But those were in days gone. Things are different now. The intimacy is no more, the creativity all but spent.

I learned today that a few days ago @AlexMurray left us. Whether he will return I know not. He has left before, but this seems final. His last message simply said "gone". He has perhaps seen what I have seen. (Although the deletion of his first account probably didn't help matters.) He was the first person I followed. I watched his rise, and his fall. I have tried to encourage him the best I can. In fact, the last time he left us he wrote a rather touching thank you to all who had helped him. I was named. And now he has gone. And maybe it is time that I went too. This is not the Opuss I remember. This is not the Opuss I want. Perhaps you too, especially this aged veterans of Opuss amongst you, should consider perhaps leaving this world of ashes and memories, and leave it to others. Please, pass this on, repost, and let the world remember the days gone by.

Cabernax

@Cabernax

Follow me for wisdom, scholarly knowledge, reviews, stories, poems and the occasional bit of randomness. But no humour. I have no sense of humour. None at all. Jokes! :)

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Surely Opuss gives back what you put in. I have been on here from the beginning and I don't see it as that different from the beginning. An app. Can't run just for the benefit of a select few, I think new contributors keep it fresh and alive! ☺

@crowncottage I'm fairly recent, but since you've on here since the beginning has it changed much? 😳 I can't really express an opinion on something I don't really know about, but @Cabernax it still seems quite intimate to me 😳

@minxyMolly I don't think so. People are still friendly and supportive. The only difference is that when there were few numbers, ranks were high - so what? The idea is for writers to share their works and give friendly criticism. I think it still does! ☺

@crowncottage same rank doesn't really mean much I woulda thought (: though I hope like you that people don't take it too seriously :S

I don't see any trolling at all. Most people encourage but they have different ways of doing so. Some however take offence at comments left about their work though. I encourage people to leave comments. It's always good to hear different people's views, positive or not.

I'm sad that you feel like this I've been on here for 6 months and have enjoyed every minute of it in that time I've probably had 2 slightly off key comments but the community I've grown to love is very supportive yes it's much quieter than it was when I first joined but I still think it's a wonderful place full of wonderful people 😊

Deep stuff right thar πŸ˜”

This is a little confusing....apart from that one person a while back I can't think of anything I've seen that I would object against???

I've only been part of Opuss for a few days now and I think it's a great place to share works and ideas 😊

Sorry you feel the way you do@Cabernax

Can't agree I'm afraid. Been here about 9 months. So I consider myself a bit if a veteran, and I'm still loving it. No intimacy? Have you read one of mine from today for starters? I think there's a great crowd here and of course there have been a few clashes but apart from that Opuss is still great. Sorry you feel the way you do. πŸ‘

Really

8 months in so I'm a mini veteran. Yes it has changed, there's more writers now and more communication tbh. I remember posting and receiving no comments, now we have in depth discussions! If you prefer a quiet app, then opuss is no longer that

@crowncottage πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

And no creativity? Really?

@leelee101 I'm glad you agree, I think the spirit is still great on Opuss! ☺😘

@crowncottage of course it is. Things may be a little quiet at the mo, but no creativity? There's new people on here nearly every day, be they young or old it doesn't matter, the more the merrier surely. It's not an exclusive members only club. Maybe people should be reading what's being posted if they want creativity. I see it every day ❀

@leelee101 @crowncottage Perhaps saying there's no creativity is wrong. There's tonnes of creativity, and I did feel a bit isolated. But the reaction to this Opuss has been phenomenal, despite the fact that everyone has disagreed, but at least it's there. I'm just not very fond of change, and there are a few good people I liked that have disappeared, which is sad.

@Cabernax as the app gets more popular and more and more people join, change is inevitable, and is good, otherwise the thing would go stale, and at the moment it's pretty vibrant. Of course it's sad when people you know and like go or move on, but that's all part of change too. Jump back on board, see how you get on. And if you're really not enjoying it, then maybe it's not the place for you anymore. Just know that if you decide to give it a go, everyone will welcome you. Like I said, it ain't an exclusive club, so come on in! πŸ‘

@leelee101 Thanks. I never truly left. I've not been quite as active recently than I have been at the beginning, but I've done a few things lately. Really, I use Opuss when I don't have a notebook to write down ideas. :) Then I am store them and the world can see them. It's no longer a social thing for me as it once was, but I can still see good in it.

Gosh, I hope you're wrong. I just joined in, only a few days ago, and all I can say is - I'm pleasantly surprised. I expected yet another social network where people are self-oriented and comments are mean (and need to be ignored), but the opposite is true. From the little I managed to observe so far, there are some true jewels here, and some rough diamonds too. But mostly, everyone is well meaning. I hope it stays that way as the community of word lovers grows, and I hope you'll find inspiration from the new faces as you did from the old and gone ones.

@marino Thank you. :)

@Cabernax I am glad you took the comments positively, as they were meant. I would be sorry if you left, but as I said, you get out what you put in. I write very little but I get pleasure from reading the work of others. It is a shame that some people have left but that doesn't take anything from Opuss itself. People press the heart according to the quality of what's written, it's quite simple and if you want to feel the love you need to write more! 😊😽

@marino well said,@leelee101 you too! 😽😽

@crowncottage and you too Linda πŸ‘β€

@Cabernax @crowncottage Thank you. It's heartening to see constructive discussion still alive in here. :)

@marino thank you, that's what Opuss is all about I think! 😊

@marino Thank you also. The comments on this Opuss alone has reignited my faith in Opuss, and made me reconsider what I initially thought. I'll lave the Opuss as it is, though, as it is make for scintillating discussion. :)

*as it DID make for scintillating discussion.

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