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Perpetual Love

As my tears start to fall
I know I'm losing it all
It's so hard, trying
to keep my head together
We lived in the here and now
because we both knew how
Something this good
could never last
forever
And now our end is close at hand
Finally I think we understand
there's no use trying to delay it
Talked
and
talked
some more
We've said it all before
'Goodbye'-such a simple word
So why can't I say it?
But I'll fasten on my mask.
and take the world to task,
knowing this love is
Never finished
Because if I close my eyes,
I can still see your face
Tears bright
Beauty undiminished.

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (32)

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Brilliant again,very moving and sad but well written

Beautiful. Agree with@RichWithey nice flow

Wow! Fabulously crafted! Sad but pure. Great stuff x

Excellent. Sad stuff, but a great write. X

@RichWithey A while ago..but close enough for it to still hurt if I allow myself to think about it😓 I'm through the worst though 😌 Thank you😚

@bryanrobertheap @leelee101 Thank you both😌 and 😚😘 for repost. Always appreciated😊

@gazplend @ckahn Thank you both for lovely comments😌

@Fly10 very good yet sad hun, get it all out your system. Here have have some new shoes 👡👡👡👡👡

Sweet as can be 💚, beautiful! Haha at @smellyfingers shoes ... Though they do work wonders

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Beautiful meaningful words, big hug!

@smellyfingers Thank you😊 Can I have some boots instead? Hear they're better for walking...😉

@sjw Hug was just the job😊 Thank for lovely comment😚

@RichWithey I agree. Writing is definitely cathartic & helps you face stuff that's perhaps been buried too long, eating away at you. Gonna try for a mix of happy next week too tho!😉

@gazplend Big thanks for repost-much appreciated 😚

@naaviie 😘 Thank you (& I've asked smellyfingers for some boots instead, keep me walking ha😉)

@Fly10 👢👢 found a pair for you! 😊 I agree, boots are brilliant. But I hear @smellyfingers is a stiletto fan at weekends 😜

@naaviie You little star!🌟 I've got countless

@naaviie You little star!✨ I've got countless pairs of kick ass heels, but you can't run very far in those! 😉

@Fly10 - for party 👠, to run 👟, for every day 👢, for summer sun 👡...?

For happy😄for sad😓for good😉for bad😡 For every heartbreak💔 and pain😭 Sunny ☀days will come again..Now which shoes shall I choose? 😃

@naaviie For happy😄 for sad😓 for good😌 and for bad😡 For every heartbreak💔 and pain😭 sunny days☀ will come again. Tonight will be prancing, so the shoes I'll need are 👯💃dancing!!x

@Fly10 sure can 👢👢 I'll be over ----------> here waiting with a big shoulder 😊

@Fly10 first class, nothing can surpass 👏

@smellyfingers All I can say to that is 😘 You're a sweetheart 💘

@SianRLD Thanks for reading & repost much appreciated😌

Sad but very good! I totally relate to this, feel the pain! :/ Hope you're ok... hug

So heart wrenching

@ZuperZed Dealt the brunt of this pain a few months ago, so in a better place now. Writing it down now feels like closure😔 And thanks for the hug😊

@Nom Thank you 😔😌

@ZuperZed And for repost😚 Big thank you 😊

@Fly10 You're welcome. Nice to hear you feel better... :)

@Fly10 Pleasure. Lovely work:)

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