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Returned Goods

I don't want it, take it
away
Please don't think I'm ungrateful
But I've decided
The price is too high
to pay

And the moon you lassoed for
me
It's beautiful-such a feat
But I'm underwhelmed
And empty
Too guarded, to see,
You see

I politely ask that you don't
attempt
To climb these walls that protect me
For you shall only gain my
contempt

Years of effort, practice and
Time
Went into building them
I want no trespassers here
It's viewed as a
Crime

I cannot risk another
Rampage
What beats inside me is mine
Sole control prevents further
Damage

It's still
Intact
You can use it again
I return it in one piece
Perfect,
In fact

Take this chance
To make a new start
Preserved & unbroken
I give you back
Your heart.

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Fly10 Leigh 2012

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (23)

Excellent :)

What if I don't want it back? Will you leave it, beating on the ground, until it dies and desiccates? :)

This is great...really enjoyed it:):)

Great stuff! πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸ‘ 

Really good hun. Like this πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Good one!

Love it and very well written babe 😘

@smellyfingers @misslittleDHP @leelee101 @MrAlex Huge thanks to you all for reposts 😊😚

@VikingHorn I'm afraid so...self preservation you see πŸ˜”

@smellyfingers Thank you sweetie 😘

@ckahn I'm glad you liked it & thanks for comment😊

@leelee101 Thanks-your comments are always appreciated 😘

@gazplend Thank you. And even better-I got some a funky shoe instead of that distinctly UN-funky pigeon! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„

@Fly10 that picture alone deserves do much better than a pigeon! πŸ˜˜πŸ‘ 

@gazplend You're a darlin' - thank you😘

Love that line "the moon you lassoed for me" πŸ’žβ‡πŸ’ž

@sjw I love that line too. It was inspired by a scene in an old film, where he says something about lassoing the moon, of that's what she wanted. In reality, if someone DID do that (or even offered!) it's doubtful I'd chuck their heart back lol πŸ˜‡

@sjw box at the end shld have been πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜!

@Fly10 I'm liking your pic very creative xx

@sjw Thank you! Glad you spotted thatπŸ˜‰πŸ˜š

@Fly10 How sad! And so heartbreak becomes contagious. I shall think about this. :)

@VikingHorn Repost is much appreciated 😌

@Fly10 Very welcome, it was to accompany my sequel to it.

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