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Revenge Is A Dish Still Served Daily

I hope your teabag bursts daily into your favourite mug
I hope the money (which you treasure so dearly) dries up,
and leaves you knowing the truth of desperation.
I hope that mice infest your walls,
and your boiler breaks each winter.
I hope your ridiculously expensive bike is stolen
I hope your latest conquest gives you the clap, and,
If said conquest transpires to be your wife,
I hope she finds your secret Viagra store, and in your absence, racks up breathless notches on the bedpost.
I hope your favourite eatery discretely overcharges you
and the chef spits in your food.
I hope you too, feel the humiliation of betrayal,
the pain of loss,
the depths of heartbreak
And I hope you never recover.

In truth of course, I wish none of these things.....

I simply hope that when the blue skies of your new life have faded,
You will stand disillusioned and lonely under the dark storm clouds,

And wonder why it was you ever left me.

Fly10

@Fly10

Just here to test the experience..

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Comments & Feedback (29)

Blimey Leigh!! Hypothetical??? Packs a punch tho hun! Hope you ok babe xπŸ’‹

Powerful! πŸ‘ŠπŸ‘Š

Quality Irish sounding curses in there πŸ‘πŸ‘

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Great write Leigh. Powerful stuff though. Here's hoping it's not you. πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

You're back! Absolutely brilliant words.

@leelee101 Maybe a reflection of the 'younger' me...older & wiser now though my friend! Thanks Lee 😌😘

Great stuff! Would not want to get on your bad side lol love the piece!

So sorry you had to go through something so awful. I'm sorry.

@Burrfoot Ha! Eases the mind & soothes the soul I find πŸ˜‰πŸ˜˜

@Jamtots Thanks for reading-glad you liked 😌😘

@smellyfingers Not hypothetical - just feelings from my (much) younger daysπŸ˜” I'm good Richard-it's nice to see you 😌😘😘

@Fly10 πŸ‘πŸ‘ Good to have you here again hun. ❀😘

@nikujagagirl Hey, it's all character building - & makes for writing material later on! Thanks for comment 😌😘

@minxyMolly πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I've been driven to some crazy things in the past! What doesn't kill you makes you stronger 'n all that jazzπŸ˜‰ Glad you liked it Molly😌❀

@Nom Hello my friend! Good to see you 😌 Back, & hoping not too brief this time. I've really missed writing + reading on Opuss. Hope life good with you?😌😘

@Fly10 up and down. I've returned to Opuss after an absence too. Some familiar faces seem to have gone sadly. Glad you're still here though :)

@Nom I hope more ups than downs😌 I've been on here very little, & as you say, a few have disappeared. The nature of the app though I suppose? Glad you're writing againπŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Nice twist to the bitterness - all part of the grieving process!

He sounds a right bastard ! That mice thing is not nice :-)

@Fly10 Oh it's nothing. I'm just so glad you're ok.

Wowzers. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

I wish there was a button to save this poem because this writing caught my attention and captivated the inner thumps of my heart. ...it was that good

Amazing! πŸ‘πŸ‘

@KiaraNecole Thank you for reading & comment - I'm glad you liked it 😌

@BellaK Much appreciated 😌😊

@beergrylles Looking back, he was a selfish bastard! Guess I'll never know about the mice though....πŸ˜‰

@Rapunzel Definitely, something you just have to go through πŸ˜” Thanks for reading 😌😊

Powerful write, love itπŸ‘πŸ’œπŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@Fly10 Wow!! Would not want to get on the wrong side of you! Glad you didn't mean it really. ✨🌟✨🌟

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