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Part 3

My heart was beating much faster than usual as I started to walk towards him. When I got to him I steadied myself, took a deep breath and said "Ben, can I talk to you please " he turned around. I felt myself go red as he looked at me.
"Of course" he said, his manly voice sending tingles down my spine. He walked a little way from his friends so they couldn't hear us. "What is it?" he asked looking into my eyes. Now was the moment to ask him so with a trembling voice I said "will you go out with me?" my whole body tingled as he seemed to contemplate the matter. "maybe" he said quickly and ran off. I breathed out suddenly realising that I had been holding my breath. Alice ran up to me "how did it go" she said cheekily
"alright I suppose"I said my mind not really focused on what I was saying. Then the bell sounded for lessons. I guess I will have to wait for Bens answer.

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