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Murder Tent

When no breeze rustles
The lush summer leaves
And the suffocating heat hangs
Among the trees,
I want to take you for a gentle stroll,
Along the river, to a place I know,
Where a dirty old sheet
Hangs in a tree along the bank,
Creating a shelter, muddy, dank,
The murder tent, full of odds and ends,
Broken bottles, necks of former friends,
Fragments of bones and blood,
A spot or puddle here and there,
Among other remains;
Snipped off fingers, locks of hair.
I'll let you see my secret lair,
But it's the last visit
You'll ever make.
Anywhere.

Irrational_Kimmi

@Irrational_Kimmi

We're all mad here... All work is mine unless otherwise stated. ~ Instagram: @irrational_kimmi ~ Kik: irrational_kimmi #projecthumanity

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Comments & Feedback (17)

Yes, it's odd! But (semi) based on a real place.

Wow, I love this style @Irrational_Kimmi haha wondering where is it xx

@Irrational_Kimmi Kim that's a great piece, but I'm afraid I'm not going... πŸ˜‰x

Scary, right? @kivihe @leelee101 I saw this odd tent by the river near me so went to investigate and it was all dirty and weird. There weren't any dead bits or anything, but my friend called it the murder tent and my imagination did the rest ☺ yes I'm warped.

@Irrational_Kimmi haha that's cool! Good place to hv tea@leelee101 !

Thanks @kivihe just what I need 😊

@Irrational_Kimmi imagination is a good thing. I can handle warped... X

Very good. You scare me to death!

@TheCodsPollocks heh, thanks (I think)! πŸ˜‰

Oooo dark and lovely dark stuff 😳 I love it!!

Creepy!

Great! Very dark...

Wow I admire this a LOT ,

@aleishagayle20 @Nom @meggie2012 @simplystylish thank you all, glad you like its odd, weird creepyness x

@Irrational_Kimmi fantastic! Love your shadowy mind. But about that camping trip... Um...

@wolfie haha β›Ί don't you trust me or something? x

@Irrational_Kimmi A very nice piece πŸ‘

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