The snowflakes
fall
White whispers
Like the softest kisses
Melt as they
land
With grace and beauty
Frozen ballerinas that
dance
A downward spiral
To collect like thoughts
Or pennies unspent
But transient
Ever at risk of
vanishing
Silently as they came.
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Comments & Feedback (11)
@sammielee46 @FriendToAnimals @sarahgamal thank you! I tried to use some unconventional similes and metaphors that aren't usually attached to snow 😊💜
@sjw it's still snowing here! I think its due to hit most places overnight. You might wake up to a blanket of white! And thanks, I drew it on my shiny new iPad mini 😍
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