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Thin Air

Your dealing with the same ol story again

That no one cares for you, and you wish it could end

Your emotions run rampant in your struggling mind

And as you sit here alone, your begging for a sign

That eventually everything will be alright

That there is some light within sight

And though there is, you chose to deny it

You don't seem to see how it could help any bit

You want to scream, release some pain, but the words don't come

Because you know that is not where relief will come from

If you care may I give some advice to you

Cause I use to be in the same boat as you are in too

Never let others determine who you are or what you choose

Because that is what thin air will make you do

JuliusWade

@JuliusWade

Random Writer from the United States. I like to write poetry, from romance to natural phenomenons. I also am currently writing a mini series based on a zombie apocalypse (thought it would be interesting :p). I love to hear feedback from everyone! It's really appreciated! :)

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