The Hall Way(Part 1)

MonteCarlo • 33 followers

I am Adel and this is my story but on my cousins account.

My name is Miley and me and family have just moved to LA. Our house is really big and scary. I have a mysterious feeling that it is haunted!

It is has been a week since we moved in and some very strange things have happened. Last night I was walking up the stairs and the bathroom door kept opening and closing. My Mum, Dad and brother had gone out so I was home alone. I called Dad but he just said that I was being silly. But it was true.

Today I went to my BFFs house and I am staying there tonight as well!
I was about to leave the house when... BANG!!!!!
I heard a big bang from kitchen! I went in to the kitchen and Mums cooking book were scattered all over the the floor! Mum and Dad are out at the pub because it is there anniversary! I thought it was my brother messing around but my gut was telling me it wasn't..

#adventure #haunted-house #supernatural-mystery #teenage-protagonist

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Comments & Feedback (2)

Jul 24, 2012 at 10:59 PM

This is great,

Jul 25, 2012 at 11:34 AM

Thanks i am really glad you like it!!! The next one will be out soon!!!😄😄😃☺😉

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