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Thinking To Mutch.

Nurgaladion • 110 followers

This poem I just wrote is to remember my lost friend. You are missed. R.I.P.

Sometimes it feels like my brain is wired all wrong,
Why all these emotions everytime they play oure song?

I'm sick of the loneliness and so sick of the fear,
Today I'm filled with tears because you are not here.

I lost you befour i had an opportunity to spill my heart,
But know this my angel it was you from the start.

I miss your laughter and your lovely smile,
Without you I feel as lost as an orphan child.

As the tears fill my pillow and sadness my mind,
There will never be another you cause you were one of a kind.

#emotional-poetry #general #grief #loss #memorial-poem

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octopuss

Apr 18, 2012 at 10:39 AM

Ouu, please accept my condolences for your loss... I need time to analyze this poem and write a review

Nurgaladion

Apr 18, 2012 at 10:48 AM

Thank you. It was hard at first. But now atleast I can talk about it. Take all the time you want mate. I'm in no hurry. ;)

sark

Apr 18, 2012 at 10:58 AM

:'(

Nurgaladion

Apr 18, 2012 at 11:06 AM

@sark why the sad face? ):

sark

Apr 18, 2012 at 11:09 AM

Makes me sad reading it, it wakes feelings(what's good), but these feeling are sad. Makes people think about when they were in the same/similar situation, or if they weren't, now they feel it!

Nurgaladion

Apr 18, 2012 at 11:14 AM

@sark I never ment to make anyone sad. I just want people to be able to relate and to feel that they are not alone. Yes these feelings hurt but if one can be open about them then one can heal from the pain. Or so I see it.

sark

Apr 18, 2012 at 11:17 AM

@Nurgaladion yes, I always feel relieved when I just write my thoughts, fears and sadness, as if I'd share it with others, cause I know, I'm not alone in the situation, and I've got less weight on my shoulders...:)

Nurgaladion

Apr 18, 2012 at 11:20 AM

@sark this is why I love this app a can relive myself of my poetic needs without being bullied. When I was in school like 10 years ago I got beat up because I wrote poetry but I never stopped.

john139

Apr 18, 2012 at 1:32 PM

Beautiful poem man

Nurgaladion

Apr 18, 2012 at 1:35 PM

Tnx alot John. Meens alot.

taffy01

Apr 18, 2012 at 4:49 PM

Very sad you got beat up for writing poetry. Everybody should have their right to what they want to do. And i really love this, very touching, although i am sorry for your loss.

taffy01

Apr 18, 2012 at 4:50 PM

Oh, and just something to keep in mind, death hurts the friends and family more then it hurts the person who faced death itself. My friends always use to say that :)