Hardly unexpected.
Everyday I knew.
Always had it coming. But
Really? From you? I
Thought you were the one.
Better than the rest. But
Reality is here, fantasy has gone,
Only you have flown the nest.
Knowing something I don't.
Everlasting love?
Not so.
(slightly off topic, but, there's my attempt)
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Lines ever more unclear, Not sure I'm even here...
Suffering with the ache in my chest. Over the future doubt of us. Under the weather can't describe it. Lingering thoughts are drowning me. Maybe it's a sign of what to come.
(My first write after the breakup) Forget having regrets Forget being depressed Forget sitting here hoping that the next one could be my last breath Forget thinking that there's nothing coming next...
You spill your heart out. Like you don't want to. But say "well you did ask". Like it's nothing on you. But it seems she hurt you. Although I don't know. But I think you liked her.
It's hard to see you're not there anymore, It's hard to see that you love me no more, It's hard to replace that missing place, That you use to fill with such hast, It's impossible to think that I've...
Why does it hurt so bad. Why does being alone make me so sad. What did I do to deserve this pain. What did I do that made me so insane. Why did you leave me.
As the thunder crashes in the sky, The clouds fight against one another, I feel our moods are just the same, broken hearts that can't recover.
Here I lay in my bed All these thoughts running through my head Wondering where it could have started. That horrible day when we parted.
Does it hurt, To leave my side, To leave the thrilling ride. Does it hurt, To say goodbye, To watch me leave and sigh. Does it hurt, To break the kiss, To see what you'll miss.
@leelee101 luckily I've got one here! ๐ฑ. Such a shame. They don't do them in luminous green. Maybe I could get a case for it...
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