@owlssayhoot

Dont Be Afraid

I drove up the long, cobbled road and approached the magnificent tudor house. It had many windows, that were so dirty i could hardly see through them.

@tcockbain

I turned around staring at the lady in the corner. She took out the iron bar from a bag and struck the first victim. I heard him shout as he flew down the green field.

@trickoftheeyes

Wilt

And She just sat there. She watched the seams rip leaving her too exposed. She felt each button keeping her together fade away and caught sight of the lace detatching itself from the fabric.

@Dj_Mac

Evil Pt.3

They wanted to torture me. I had no idea why. I didn't know anything, I wasn't special. I was just me.

@Dj_Mac

Evil Pt.4

"Why?" I asked my ex, John as he searched through the tools. "Because you dumped me" he replied "Now get ready for some pain ......... (To be continued sorry each part so short).

@Ringo360

Awakening: Part 2

And the angel left me to die. The angle fled hell and climbed the steep stairwell to heaven... Leaving death behind in its path. There was no angel now to guide me, nor to heal my bloodied wounds.

@ryskew

Please read: Criticism

Hey, I was just wondering if someone would be able to read through a short story I made earlier, either one of them to give me some criticism and let me know how good I actually am at writing.

@AlexMurray

The Blessed Hollow

A short story I made for English a while back. It's pretty long, but I would value any feedback.