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I turned around staring at the lady in the corner. She took out the iron bar from a bag and struck the first victim. I heard him shout as he flew down the green field. She moved along to the next person. She stood on the stool like a statue. Shaking she fell onto the rough mat, i sighed thinking she may be free but the lady picked her up and returned her to the stool. The lady hit her, making her body fly faster than her fear. I was next, i sat in the bag shivering as she came over, but she didn't take me, she took a notepad. She wrote down her score and threw her hands into the air and shouted " i won the golf!"

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