Eleven suns rotate, they spin
As three million days and nights begin
Nine distant worlds unlike our own
This place I feel must be my home
Because I don't fit down here on earth
Been wanting to quit here since my birth
Back to the place that I long for the worst
That distant grace in the universe
Where love flows free no judgments be
A hug from me is embraced with glee
Where we're all just free to be who we be
I'm so sick to death with conformity............):
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Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx
We are the stars, There are millions within the galaxy, We stand strong within the sky, Held together like epoxy, We make up constellations, Like Ursa Minor and Major, The star signs come from...
I'm imagining worlds out there, Things we've never truly seen, Stuck on this here planet, Is all we've ever been.
A small song I composed one extremely wet afternoon. It's pretty awful. And In 6/8 timing. Watch the skies. Pieces are Watch the skies.
It's not weird at all! I actually agree with you fully about the idea of conforming and how sickening it is that the society is exactly about just that. 😔
I love your poems. You're really talented and often they have a strong message. I really think you should enter competitions, your good enough you could win. Make sure you keep them too - one day you might want to out together a collection. I just wanted to say you are one of my faves on here and thought you should know :)
@Stablish you know how I feel about society and conforming! And remember; all the truly great thinkers, artists and writers are thought to be 'weird' by the world in general!
@redfae I did see your post about the H.G. Wells festival. I'm putting together a e-book at the moment. I'm just waiting for a few more poems to fit in. I really appreciate your comment, it has been a tough few days. Ps. I haven't forgotten about "drift" I'm saving it for the weekend.😊
@Irrational_Kimmi Thank you, It was a stressful day at work yesterday full of silly arguments that's could have been ignored. Just my way of letting out steam. Plus I do feel like from another planet sometimes.😉 thanks for reading, I love your writing too.😊
@TheViolator Thanks mate, it looks like we all come from that place.😉 Thanks for the comment. Hope you have a nice day.😊
Thank you @minni92. I appreciate your comment, can't wait for more of your writing.😊 Ps. Those cakes look nice, your making me hungry.😉
@Codenameverity I would love a hug this morning, I'm a huggy person, no one to hug though, apart from my mum.😉 will your arms reach this far?
Yummy, I might have to have some cake today😊. Happy birthday for whenever it was.😊 have a lovely day hope the weathers better where you are.😔
@Stablish was in march :) thank you! The weather is nice but I won't be enjoying is as I'm stuck in the library all day :(
@minni92 I wish it was sunny nice here I'm starting to miss the sun😔 Hope you get to enjoy some of your day.😊
@Stablish I wasn't saying you didn't lol. Well, I hope you enjoy enjoy it :) can I have an ecopy too?
@redfae Yeah you will be the first😊 just email me your address, hopefully it will be done soon.😊 have a good day.
@Codenameverity I will, one thing, you could have just sent me an email to save yours being posted for everybody to see. Unless you don't mind.
@meggie2012 Thank you, all you have to do is believe you can do it, that simple😊 I've only been writing poetry since I first got opuss. Good luck with your own poetry😊
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