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Traces Of Your Love (collaboration)

Traces of me lay bare,
Elevated, unaware.
Empirical nuances - filter through.
You rarely notice, it's cruel.

You've grown immune to my needs,
Watching as destruction plants it's seed.
Warmth has gone,
I should have known all along.

Love has wilted from your face,
I stand alone in the halls of our embrace.
There was a time, there was a place.
But now, I fall from grace.

And as I search for what I've lost,
Your name is on my heart, embossed.
It's burning deep a blackened hole.
Through which escapes, my tortured soul.

So as I sit here, bemused and so alone.
Wishing that you would, maybe just come home.
I start to ask myself, is it really worth?
When your love to me just recently, has seemed more like a curse.

1st part @yikici
2nd part @sJw
3rd part @richwithey
4th part @LeeLee101
5th part @Stablish

It sounds finished to me but if @sarahgamal has a change of heart you can feel free to carry it on, if not and with @yikici's permission I will name it I guess.

Check out @yikici's post for complete rule list.

Stablish

@Stablish

Twenty five year old male from Sudbury, Suffolk, England. I write poetry, quotes, songs and the rare story. Thanks to all who follow, like or re-post xxx

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Comments & Feedback (43)

@Yikici I am writing up the rules now to add to the end, my phone is nearly dying though so I just wanted to post first incase. I hope I've got it right πŸ˜“

Sarah told me she'll pass mate, so name the thing if you will sir πŸ‘ Nice job too 🍻🍻

Looks done to meπŸ‘ will pass this week 😊 but well done all of you πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Stablish that's just brilliant -good call. A delish end to a delightful poem. I look forward to the title of the piece. You guys are just awesome! @sjw @RichWithey @leelee101 πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’β˜Ίβœ¨

Thank you all for being good sports & taking part in this fun tagging game -I'll give you all a worthy shout out before next Friday. 😘

@yikici cheers hun that was good fun. πŸ‘πŸ‘ Looking forward to next Friday already! 😘😘

@leelee101 woo hoo! Glad y'all enjoyed it. 😘✨

@yikici Your most welcome, I just had to take an early lunch break and run home for my charger, it has been really fun, a great fresh idea. Can't wait till next week now😘

Pssst you forgot the tag #FridayFun πŸ˜‰

@Stablish awwww you're a sweetie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Now I need to think, poem, prose or story for next Friday.... Oooo I have an idea, collaborators can vote πŸ˜‰ so what say you guys? @Stablish @leelee101 @sjw @RichWithey πŸ˜˜πŸ’βœ¨

A brilliant ending well done πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@yikici that was brill really enjoyed it thanks for the tag πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’

@yikici All sorted now, I trust you'll make a good choice, we can vote if you want though.

I'm impressed, well done everyone! πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΊ

@sjw Missyβ„’ it's a pleasure having you guys participate enthusiastically ☺thank you 😘✨

@TheCodsPollocks Cheers Jimmy πŸΊπŸ»πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Stablish thank you, you've done brilliantly. 😘 I'd still love a vote from

All 😘✨

@TheCodsPollocks thank you, happy to hear you enjoyed it. ☺✨

@Stablish Well done mate. Sweet title too πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ»

@yikici I'd prefer poem hun tbh πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 Cheers for picking me Bro, it was fun, my phone was on a race against time but I've brought my charger back to work now lol, I suppose some work will have to be done at some point thoughπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

I don't mind @yikici I like the suspense lol 😘

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@leelee101 @Stablish @RichWithey you guys rock ☺ I'll prepare an ickle poem verse for Friday ✨

@RichWithey It defiantly is, I felt bad for ending it so soon, but that's just the way it came outπŸ˜“ I'm happy we managed to do a joint effort, it was greatπŸΊπŸ˜ƒπŸ»πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

@yikici And I'm easy too, whatever you want to do with it, can't wait for it now πŸ˜ƒπŸ’œπŸ˜˜

Cool ☺😘✨

@sjw see my comment above -it seems I forgot to tag you in 😏

@marymint finished poem 😘

@yikici yayy! I rock πŸ˜‚I have a tshirt that says Brunettes Rock lol thanks hun it was a fun write 😘🌹

@sjw lol brunettes definitely rock 😘✨

@Stablish no problemo fella knew you'd enjoy it. As I think did we all! Definitely a winner, this Friday Fun πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ»

@yikici we most certainly do! 😘😘😘

@yikici we most certainly do rock! 😘😘😘

@leelee101 woo hoo! We certainly do. lol I was just thinking we could have squeezed in another poem since the first one. Lol

@yikici πŸ˜‚ yeah we could have, but you know, too much of a good thing and all that. Let's keep it to one, I think we're all looking forward to next Friday already, and wondering if we'll get tagged! Great fun hun, well done you πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 I know, I know -hence why I didn't start it now. πŸ˜‰ I'm glad it's received well, I can sleep well tonight. 😝✨

@yikici ha no problem with the πŸ’€πŸ’€ tonight hunny! πŸ‘ I reckon once the idea has come to the others attention Fridays will be spent on tenterhooks waiting to see if we've been tagged! πŸ‘πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@leelee101 Agree, it shall be something special to look forward to, it picked my afternoon upπŸ˜ƒ Again really good idea @yikici ✨✨🌟

@leelee101 @Stablish awwww that's just the loveliest thing I've heard, thank you. 😘✨

@yikici πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

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