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Our Love Is Gone

It's so cold without your loving heart
And it gets colder with our two hearts so far apart

Kisses and touches hunt my aching heart
Want to move on but I don't know where to start

The distance between us is keeping my heart at bay
Don't know if I should let go knowing that in my heart you will always stay

Or should I hold on and hush the pain inside?
But it hurts without you near and I can't move on, I lied

My tears are no longer washing the pain
A hollow heart now waiting in vain

My heart is getting colder and the pain just keeps going on
The wait is not making me stronger...I guess our love is gone
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Fictional and inspired by the lovely @yikici and her piece "Lost Heart"

sarahgamal

@sarahgamal

A 32 mother of 2 .

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Comments & Feedback (14)

@yikici 😘 wasn't the idea in my head initially but went there . Hope u like it 😊😘

Beautifully sad....if that's a thing 👏😘

@patdolan83 yes it is I think 😳 I use it all the time ... Thank u and thanks for rp 😘

@BethyBoo and @tetti2 thank u ladies for the rp 😘😘

😢❤❤❤👏👏

@leelee101 thanks Lee and kisses for rp😘😘😘

@LiSaC64 thank you for rp 😘

@sjw thank u for lovely rp 😘🍸

That's beautiful Sarah, I really like it -it's got a semi-haunting sadness to it. 😔

@yikici glad u liked it 😊 yes I know... If you go through my past post you will find it's either am a big drama queen, or helplessly in love and/or a dreamer guess its my genre although not always true😔 but I would cry in a movie or reading a book and so on 😁 a dozen roses for rp 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

@eddie12309 thank u for rp 😘

@sarahgamal I can relate to that a lot, I write a lot of dark stuff -none of which are true, but that's just my style. I'm also a soppy soul with films too -so yea, I totally understand. ☺ It's great you can write about stuff that's not real; but if you can make believable that's just brilliant. 😘 Lots of 💗💗💗💗💗💐💐💐💐💐for the lovely roses. 😘✨

@sammie46 and @jackalice thank you both for lovely rp 😘😘

@RichWithey thanks for rp 😘

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