Life has lost it's vital spark
Aimless faces in the park
Nothing matters anymore
Can't drag myself up off the floor
Heartless souls with empty minds
Offer me a hate that blinds
Leaving me with this aggression
You're the cause of my depression.
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Comments & Feedback (12)
@TheCodsPollocks absolutely brilliant, I especially love the last two lines, they complete the poem perfectly πππ
@shaheenashapeenur Thank you so much for your lovely comments and repost, and thank you for the opportunity - glad you liked it xx ππ
@Stablish @leelee101 Thank you U2 nutters for the comments and reposts - much appreciated. This started off being about Pompey's plight ( 'park' was with a capital P referring to Fratton of course but I thought it might look like I was taking the piss) ππβ½ Probably best not to mention footer, eh?
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