I know your heart is breaking,
I know you feel confused,
"How could he/she
do this to me!?"
You're battered, beaten, bruised.
I know you feel that no-one else has ever felt such pain,
You're sure it's true
That only you
Will never love again.
And I guess it doesn't help much when you've really had enough,
That mum and dad
say "Don't feel bad,
It's only puppy love."
But the first cut is the deepest on this tapestry of life
Where a lover's lies
Intensify
As Cupid turns the knife.
So listen little kitten
as you cry yourself to sleep
Tomorrow it will hurt still,
but trust me - not so deep.
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Haven't reached this point with my girls yet, but know it'll come..& I'm not looking forward to it! π Beautifully written π
@Fly10. I know what you mean - it breaks your heart to see their's breaking. All you can do is be there for them. Many thanks for the comment and the repost. π
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