Gleaming golden shafts of sunlight pierce the shimmering, jade leaves
Emerald moss carpets the jagged, obsidian black rocks
Crystal clear drops of diamond dew glisten in the radiant, amber illumination
Delicately painted flowers shimmer like precious jewels as they elegantly sway in the swirling breeze
White sapphire water dances and sings as it spirals thought the vividly vibrant forest
Ancient, gnarled trees soar gracefully into the azure blue heavens
Muscles coil under the shining, auburn fur of a agile deer as it curls through the viridian woods
Colourful birds, warble strikingly, high pitched songs to the dazzling world
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Beautiful...may I suggest adding a little punctuation? I just think it might read better with it, but it's your call ๐
@Irrational_Kimmi actually scratch that try and see the good side of that. Poemy type peices like this don't really need that much
This so beautiful, makes me want to go there and see for myself. Lovely stuff!!!! โจ๐โจ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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