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Ordeal

As I move toward you
My tummy starts to twist
Not for excitement but in fear
This an experience easily missed

You gather yourself around
Prepare to do your worst
Leather paddles at the ready
Hose us down with water first

Fixed into position
We move forward, slow
And so it begins
No where for us to go?

Jets of water smash us
The noise like thunder booms
Locked inside this tin shell
Captured inside this tomb

Then the brushes gather
Surrounded on all sides
Spinning and clashing
This is the mother of all rides

My fear gains momentum
Panic rises from within
No escape possible
Endurance wearing thin

But then I see a light
And my heart skips a beat
Is it really possible
I can escape from this seat?

And at last it's over
All the fear i can now squash
I have survived my ordeal
At that bloody car wash!

©16/03/13

carolsgregory

@carolsgregory

Loving being a part of Opuss!

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Comments & Feedback (12)

@sammielee46 thank you for the rp☺🍷💜

@carolsgregory my pleasure honey 😘❤🌹

😂😂 brilliant hun! ❤😘

@leelee101 thanks Lee and thank you for the rp☺🍺❤

@HeatherAnne thanks for the RP ☺🍷💜

@leelee101 did you win the acrostic challenge? Have I missed your post? X

@carolsgregory yes I won it hun, but I try to set weekends apart for family and home, so although I'll post a couple of pieces, I can't use that time for judging a competition. That's best saved for when I have the time during the week. 👍 So you haven't missed it, and I'll be posting on Monday morning. ❤❤😘

@leelee101 thanks Lee would hate to miss it? Have a great weekend! X🍺🍺❤

Hahahaha 👍👍👏👏

@sarahgamal glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the RP babe! 🍷☺💜

@carolsgregory thank you sweetheart, you too ❤😘

😂😂 I knew about half way through it was a car wash lol 👏👏👏😘

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