Give me a taste, give me a sip
Gimme something that tastes like shit
Give me the pain and take my tears
Please take away everything but my fears
Be the brave, be the strong
Let me help you see what's right from wrong
Tell me the truth, tell me more lies
Go make me crumble so I despise
Oh yes mother, right away father
Kick me down so I'll go no further
Leave me now, leave me forever
Let me die and slumber however
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Comments & Feedback (10)
@Irrational_Kimmi @minxyMolly I'm not okay, not really and this isn't a cry for attention. I'm just exhausted, mentally and emotionally i wish I could switch off the pain and hurt and anger. The writing helped a bit...I'm just gonna try to forget my own life for abit. ππ
Oh how sad. Sometimes things just get on top on top of us. Write it all away if you need to, but we're all here for you. Sending mucho hugs, cake, vodka and Chaka khan. πππππ
@Irrational_Kimmi @eddie12309 thanks, just watched shame so that was a nice distraction. Tbh the drinking needs to stop before I end up a full blown drunk. So water it is tonight
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