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Raw By You

You scour me

Leave me raw

You sand me down

Layers of myself fall

Your abrasive words

Rasp down deep

Leaving open sores

That begin to weep

Wells of venom

Poison all of me

The hurt you inflict

Shall not leave me be

The scars stay hidden

In a secret place

Hidden hurt hides

Behind this face

©Kim Brown 5th January 2013

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (11)

I hope this isn't true! 😽

I really like this but hope it's not true 😔xx

Raw intense - Brilliant!

@crowncottage @sjw @Rapunzel from past tense feelings my sweets...long time ago now...but last night this write popped into my head at about 1 am...funny how past memory can still seem so present...I THANKYOU for any RP's ...mwah ✨😘❤🍸✨😘❤🍸✨

@patdolan83... Thanks for the much appreciated RP Hun 💋💋💋💋💋💋

Raw indeed... Glad it's in the past my lovely. 👏👏👏👍❤😘

@leelee101 thanks my sweet...well and truly Hun ...a huggie for that RP 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

@RichWithey...thanks handsome for the RP 💋🍸💋🍸💋

@tetti2...thanks my sweet for the kind RP 💋❤💋

@minxyMolly..mwah my sweet for that lovely RP 💋❤🍸💐

@sarahgamal...mwah for that RP Hun 💋💐💝

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