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Requiem

The screaming erupted that day
Like pop rocks from my Grandmother's mouth.

My Mother, in the front house, was busy mopping the floor,
And I, had been drifting, like a lazy bee, with nothing to do.

My Grandmother's shrieking came from a place I did not recognize
It was primal,
and it shred away the calm of the day.

My Mother bolted out the back door, and suddenly,
I was alone.

I was too afraid to follow
So I stayed in the house and listened as my Mother's voice rose,
from somewhere deep,
in a throaty, guttural wail.

I heard my Great Grandmother's
weary boned shuffling hastening from around front.
We had been weeding together, but I had long since tired of pill bugs and snails, retreating instead to the cool of the house.

I peered out the back screen door
and watched as she labored
up the stairs to my Grandmother's apartment and disappeared inside.

Soon, she came back down and took me for a walk to the corner store for my favorite candy.

I was four years old the day my Grandfather died.
The day my life shifted
And I was set a little adrift.

I was never allowed up to my Grandmother's apartment that day.
I spent the afternoon making aimless circles on my tricycle under the carport.

When my Uncles and Aunts started arriving no one pinched my cheeks.
Odd behavior for a family who treated their children like treasure.

I was my Grandfather's crown jewel.
He called me Cleopatra, and I held court upon his knee.
I was perfect only in his eyes,
and the day he died is the day I fell back to earth.

ckahn

@ckahn

A girl.

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Comments & Feedback (17)

This really is really heartwarming. It's obvious the effect it had on you as your memory is do vivid. 😔💚

@eddie12309 yes, and your poem was quite a catalyst, bringing it all forward again. 😘

This is... real. Raw. love t.

Love it ❤❤😔😘

@Aceline @sarahgamal thank you lovely ladies☺ glad you liked it. It was an emotional write. And thank you for kind RP's✨💗✨

Wonderful! The emotion in it is amazing

@inferno thank you. Kind praise indeed! ☺ I was a bit emotional while writing it. Thank you for kind RP! 🌟✨💗✨🌟

This gave me goosebumps because the emotion in it is so evident gorgeous write sending you hugs 😘❤💝

@sjw Awww, thank you my dear. High praise, I'm honored indeed. And thanks for lovely RP✨😘✨

What a beautiful write kristi. 💪💪💪hugs for you hun 👍❤😘

This is so beautiful and extremely heart wrenching! It's so awful when someone you love so much is taken from you at an age where you can't fully understand it.💜

What a fantastic piece. Really beautiful, sad too, especially when so very young. ✨sending you loving thoughts. ✨🌟✨✨🌟✨

@Kirsty_Bee @sleepydragon thank you for your kind words 😘 it really resonated as I was writing it. Thanks for lovely RP✨💗✨

I often wonder what little children go through when there is trauma in a family. Adults watch that they are safe but nobody is in a position to spend time calming and reassuring them, it's sad. At least you had his love for four years! 😘

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@crowncottage yes, I definitely had his love till he died. He was a great Grandfather. I've seen pic of when he was younger. Quite handsome too. looked like Erol Flynn. Thanks for kind words and for kind RP! ✨💗✨

@RichWithey thanks Rich. It did get a tad emotional while I was writing it. Thanks for hugs! And for RP! 🌟✨💗✨🌟

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