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It's Time, Grandma

You're slipping through our fingers,
Don't think there's anything we can do.
I'm sure it's the end of the line this time,
There's no way you can pull through.

Maybe if you'd listened
To all of our advice
You wouldn't be ebbing away
At the cause of your costly vice.
If only you'd have done what we'd said
You'd be happy and well and alive,
Just stuck to your flipping 800 mls a day
It's not that hard if you try.
If only you'd stopped smoking your brains out
And put the lighters down
This pain that we all feel inside,
These constant tears and frowns,
Would not be here, they'd be packed away
In their solemn box.
But now the furrows only deepen
At the thought of impending loss.

You're going, we have to bid farewell
And shield the youngest ones from the sorrow,
We have to say our goodbyes tonight
Because there mightn't be a tomorrow.
We've had far to many close calls
To have any more,
There's no more chances to be had
It's time to close the door.
There's nothing to be done
But choose the coffin wood,
I'm not ready for that day to come,
I thought it never would.
I can hear the banshee keening,
It's time to open up the pane
And cover the looking glass
So your soul it won't attain.
The wailing's getting louder
And she's got out her comb,
It's time for me to go now
And leave you two alone.
A tear is sliding down my cheek
At her mournful song's climax,
You breath in some fresh clean air
A breath that is your last.
You sigh tumultuously
And I see your soul expire,
As the pain lifts from your chest
And the banshee retires.

Just a shell, a pallid shell,
The old woman I loved so
And a new banshee is born in me
As I tear apart my soul.

Delilah

@Delilah

Just an average 17-yr-old from Northern Ireland. Kik: Delilah_95

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Comments & Feedback (32)

This is so emotional, well written, brilliant. I feel for you. I was smoking when I read this and promptly put it out. I shed a tear at this poem 😥

@Thebeautifulundead thanks good to see my words are able to affect 😌

So sad.... Glad I gave up the evil weed years ago. ✂🚬

@TheCodsPollocks glad to hear you did 😌

💔😭😭💔 whatcha doing to me kid. You alright?

@Delilah 😢 very sad but well written 😥

@naaviie I'm surviving she's still here for now 😔

@smellyfingers thank you sir and thanks for the repost too 😌

@Earthbound thanks for the repost chick 😌

@Delilah mine passed a few years ago, so know what it's like. Pain eases with time hun 😘❤

@smellyfingers thanks pet 😘❤

@Delilah hugs

@naaviie thanks chick 😌

Good write but very sad massive hug babe xx

@sjw thanks my lovely xx

Awww. I'm so sorry. I know your pain. I lost my Grandmother just this past Mothers day on May 13th. Strange feeling isn't it? Like a void in the universe.

@Thebeautifulundead your offspring will thank you. Kick that habit!

@ckahn well she's not gone yet it's a bit of a waiting game now. I'm sorry to hear that, I hope you and you're family are feeling better.

I hope she passes comfortably. Thank you. Mine was 94 and passed comfortably in her sleep. We should all be so lucky!

@ckahn I k is granny's only 61 and she's a kidney dialysis patient, chain-smoker, I think she has pneumonia too. It's good to hear she passed calmly, I hope gran finds some way for that to happen

Prayers and hugs for you

@ckahn thank you 😌

Oh bless you my sweet...such a beautifully and heartbreaking poem...so very sad...I hope you gain some comfort from your own beautiful words and of course your family and we your Opuss family.....big hugs xxxx

@misslittleDHP thank you chick 😌 and thanks for the repost too Opuss Family cx

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@Delilah You're welcome. It is a great poem, and I didn't know how to offer my consolation, so I opted to repost and like. :/

@Earthbound thanks

Breaks my heart :'( beautifully written

@IndiaSparrow thanks m'dear and for the repost too

Oh I hope you're not feeling too empty. Keep strong. Writing helps.

@Nom thank you m'dear it really does 😌

I don't know how I missed this one at the time, it's very good and I am glad the worst is over now! 😽

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