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The Curious Case Of The Bipolar Mind

Autumns litter scattered on the ground,
The trees still whisper excited sounds.
Their last leaves, the colour of fire,
The joyous church bells ring out across the shire.
The last of the apples cling on with conviction,
Avoiding the foragers baking addiction.
A perfect picture of an October day;
As the suns diamonds reflect on the lake.

Alas, things are not all that they seem;
The dark storm clouds gather in their reams.
Heading this way without care or warning,
A shower of pessimism suddenly in the morning.
An empty tempest batters the walls
Desperate cracks appear, then it falls.

But, the sun peeps out, and now it's glowing.
The storm has passed, the rivers are flowing.
The birds are manic in the pastel blue sky.
He asks himself again why, why, why?

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (7)

Love it Eddie! Can picture the scene β€πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@gazplend thankyou. It's my attempt at metaphorical writing. β˜ΊπŸ’š

A fab write my sweet πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€β€πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Really really good hunny captures the swing well πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€πŸŒΉ

@misslittleDHP thank you my lovely. 😘

@leelee101 thank you indeed. Was going to continue with another verse but was unsure. 😘 For the comment. πŸ‘

@eddie12309 just fine as it is πŸ‘β€

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