Sign In
Back

The Open Window

She didn't want them
To hear their intoxicated sound

Every day
When she came home from school
What would be waiting
empty or blood in a pool?

She would escape
To anyone's house
Block out that life
This little frightened mouse

When she was older
At night walking up the street
She could already hear their arguing
Echoing off the concrete

How many bottles
Had they had tonight
Why after so many years
Did they still have to fight?

Her brothers and sisters
The nest they had flown
Leaving her struggling
With her parents alone

It was always through the open window
Their slurred shouting could be heard
Alcohol fuelling
Every single hateful word

Embarrassed, not lonely
She struggled on
Until the day
She could afford a place of her own

She now opens her own windows
And frees her mind
The child of an alcoholic
Those memories she'll leave behind

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

100
Stories

Similar Stories

Comments & Feedback (15)

@naaviie 😊

A touching early entry! Just what I like to see! 💚😘✨

@naaviie thank you lovely. It's late and I'm tired. Busy day tomorrow. 💤💤💤💤

Have a good sleep!!! And good luck for tomorrow 😊

@Stablish @Odinsfist thanks for the reposts. Glad you liked it 😔

@eddie12309 I always enjoy your stuff

Fantastic write hunny. 👍❤😘

Wow this is amazing my sweet...a very strong and touching piece...really struck a chord with me...I'm smelling a winner👃❤😉😘

@misslittleDHP sadly it's about me. 😔 thanks for the comment I'm honoured.

@leelee101 thank you too 😔💚

@misslittleDHP @eddie12309 and for the reposts. Now I must really go to sleep 💤💤💤💤

@leelee101 poo last comment should have been for you and Kim. Doh!

@eddie12309 haha! Never mind hunny! Off you go... 💤💤💤👍❤😘

Very good, a nice ending. 😊

Relatable & heartbreaking 😔👏

Similar Writers